The Willow Tree

Feb 14, 2010 17:18

In the universe of Line of Demarcation, a few missing toes won't stop Dean from selling his soul at Cold Oak--or from taking on a job a few weeks after.

Length ~ 4K words

Rating: Let's say Teen. Trust me, this is way more kid-safe than what we saw on screen last Thursday.

Beta'd by the remarkably skilled and insightfulblubird_pie
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demarcation, dean owies, fic

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zoemathemata February 15 2010, 03:04:43 UTC
I love this verse.

the last line was killer good. Hands down best line I've read all day!

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greeneyes_fan February 16 2010, 01:44:36 UTC
I'm glad I made it work for you!

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roque_clasique February 15 2010, 07:15:57 UTC
Oh, god, yeah, that last line. Damn. So painful, and you know that's exactly how he'd think.

This was great; I was so pleased to see a continuation of the 'verse! Thanks so much, I loved it.

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greeneyes_fan February 16 2010, 01:45:44 UTC
Glad to hear it. And thanks again for giving me the prompt, I'm glad I've started writing, I think I'm learning a lot.

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marlowe78 February 15 2010, 19:16:06 UTC
Ouch, that last line hurt!
Never realized toes are so important. And I certainly will take better care of my feet now.
Nice 'verse (uhm..not 'nice' per sé, but you get what I mean, right?).

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greeneyes_fan February 16 2010, 01:48:44 UTC
Nice as in "does a nice thorough job of messing with Dean?"

Glad you enjoyed.

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marlowe78 February 16 2010, 09:40:17 UTC
Nice as in "does a nice thorough job of messing with Dean?"
Exactly! *grin*

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blubird_pie February 15 2010, 23:57:18 UTC
Wow! You already know that I love this story, but I wanted to give you an extra "bravo" for that second fight scene. "Take that, you creepy dead bitch" indeed!

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greeneyes_fan February 16 2010, 01:49:23 UTC
I'm glad I was able to make it all work to your satisfaction!

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stjra February 21 2010, 23:34:24 UTC
I really like this verse and was excited to see a continuation.

I wasn't disappointed in my excitement. This was lovely in that bittersweet way that most S4 fics are and that last line was just heartbreaking.

Well done. :D

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greeneyes_fan February 23 2010, 02:28:20 UTC
Glad to be of service!

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