Singing in The Dead of Night (ch. 5)

Feb 10, 2010 18:20

Title: Singing in The Dead of Night ( Read more... )

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sweetone41185 February 12 2010, 00:59:31 UTC
Its sweet how the three of them are sort of becoming a little family, even if temporary. But hopefully Neal can convince Birdie that he really does want her and Vincent.

I think Birdie is on to something, everything so far has been pretty easy for them. Something is bound to go wrong probably sooner then later.

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greeneyes0911 February 12 2010, 01:56:58 UTC
I know right! Although it's a little annoying to me that Birdie's all housewifey. But then she doesn't have much choice. She's kind of stuck in the house.

Well considering I know what's going to happen....lol. I'm having a hard time rounding off The Time Has Come because I don't know how to end it. But this one I have it all plotted out in my head, even the ending. So it's easier to fly through. Plus the Alice fandom is dying down, and this one gets a ton of hits on fanfiction. I know...I'm evil and selfish.

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sweetone41185 February 12 2010, 02:15:03 UTC
Yeah come to think of it she's not the housewife type. But being stuck in the house all day doesn't leave you with much to do I suppose.

Hey, I'm benefiting from your selfish evilness cuz I get to read it so go ahead with the selfish evilness. Lol.

Alice's fandom really is dying down. I guess the novelty has kind of worn off now that its been a few months.

I used to be all over FFN but its hard to weed out the bad stuff. Live Journal tends to have better fan fic. I think, not that FFN doesn't have good stuff I'm just lazy and hate weeding through bad stuff. Lol.

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greeneyes0911 February 12 2010, 02:21:15 UTC
Well she does have to still feed Vincent. She doesn't have much choice but to be up to make breakfast, and stuff. So I think that's kind of why. She's going to get a job with Elizabeth. Actually in the next chapter will be her interview. So that'll give her something more interesting to do.

I've started the next chapter. I'm about three pages in....ish. Poor Alice, i really love it. And I plan to finish the fanfic. It's just easier to write something when I'm getting feedback on such a mass scale. Already this fic has half as many hits as my Alice fic has had.

Oh I know. Usually I read the first chapter and if it sucks I ditch it. Which is what I guess some people have done with my stuff cause I get fewer and fewer hits each time. Course, my new rule is I don't post the next chapter till I have 100 hits...it's a nice rule.

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sweetone41185 February 12 2010, 02:40:33 UTC
True, she can't really not feed him. Lol. Plus she has to eat too. A job will be good for her. I bet she'll enjoy getting out of the house.

Yeah, feedback is encouraging. I can see how it would be hard to be motivated when you don't get a lot or at least know its getting read.

Well, I don't know what those people are smoking cuz your stuff doesn't suck. I've read some bad fan fic. Didn't stick with it even a whole chapter probably. I have little patience for bad writing. I have strange pet peeves. That is a nice rule. Lol.

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greeneyes0911 February 12 2010, 02:48:53 UTC
I think she'll be fab at doing what El does. Scarlett has impeccable taste, and a lot of people are getting into the vintage thing which is what her style is. So chea.

Well I think part of it may be the non-slash in my fic. i don't do slash. i can't read it, I can't write it, and I don't particularly care for it. That's not saying there's anything wrong with it. It's just saying I like my sexy men straight, and my heroes to have strong heroines. That's just me. Another thing is I think the length. My fics are by no means short. Some people just don't have the time or patience to stick with a long piece. Some people (me for example) don't read work in progresses. Because we don't feel like waiting around for a chapter to be posted.

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sweetone41185 February 12 2010, 03:03:15 UTC
I think so too. I'd hire her. Lol. I like vintage. I'm more into the decorative aspect of it but its still cool.

Yeah, slash fic is very popular. I'm not into it either. If someone likes that then thats fine but its not my thing. I just don't find it appealing. I can see how people don't like to read long things. I have trouble reading long stuff at times but if it keeps my attention, I'm good. I vary, sometimes I will only read completed stuff, sometimes i do in progress stuff, usually only on here because people seem to be better about updating. Not always the case on FFN. But half the time with FFN I forget about stuff and then suddenly theres an email in my inbox about a new chapter.

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greeneyes0911 February 12 2010, 03:27:08 UTC
I like the clothes. I like the furniture. i like the room designs. Yeah I just prefer vintage to new shit. More original, and unique and the like.

I dunno why it's so popular. I mean I could understand it if guys were writing femmeslash because guys are all 0.0 over two chicks. Me? I've never like the idea of two dudes. If that's your lifestyle that's cool. But I'm not going to pick my porn that way (if I picked porn lol). Plus I don't get the whole creating slash when there is no like indication of slash. Like Neal and Peter? Yeah Peter is married, and Neal had a girlfriend. They're obviously not gay. I dunno whatev. Ish yeah I forget too, but eh.

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sweetone41185 February 12 2010, 03:48:19 UTC
Guys reading and writing femslash I could get. Cuz thats how guys are. But yeah, the idea of two dudes has never appealed to me at all. I don't get the random slash either and most of the slash seems to be that kind. Like one time I stumbled across sibling slash. Don't know how but yeah and also ew.

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greeneyes0911 February 12 2010, 03:51:47 UTC
ACK sibling slash! I looked through some Four Brothers fiction and came across Bobby/Jack fics. EW! I'm like dude they're brothers. That's so weird. Me? I like my men having sexy time with women. Usually my women with the personalities I created lol. Cause I'm rad that way.

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sweetone41185 February 12 2010, 04:00:01 UTC
Weird and gross and wrong on so many levels. Lol. Its good to be the creator I bet.

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