First of all, I apologize but I can't read this again now. I'm sure you know the reason and understand me (I woke up with puffy eyes T_T). I know that I'm going to read the whole thing again soon (just like I did with the main story) but right now the wounds are still fresh. *cries*
Despite all the crying and my whining yesterday, I really think that your ending couldn't be better, more realistic and more appropriate. Because what the hell? We know Akame, right (okay, we think we do) and Akame is just like how you portrayed them (in my mind they are); angsty, deep, controversial, painful and never-ending. I think whatever those two people had between them will never end even if they are not together anymore. Somehow, though it sounds cheesy, I find the lyrics of Kizuna so appropriate to describe their relationship. Their bonds will never disappear, whatever that bond is.
Uhm.. back to the point. I must repeat my favorite comment to you, that is, you write so realistically, throughout these wonderful journey that was this fic, I could feel so attached to them, I laughed and cried and loved these characters. I don't really want to let them go:)
Kame was the biggest mystery for me for the whole time yet Jin surprised me the most at the end:) I understood Kame's feelings, I understood his mistakes yet I didn't agree with the way he wanted to solve problems. Yet I cannot say I would do otherwise, I felt his desperation to make this relationship work. And life is so unfair. They managed to overcome so many difficulties and be mature about it, yet now they have to face something that is not within their control. This is tragic. Tragic. You should use the genre "tragedy" because it is!
And Jin. I liked his ideas and efforts, all his weaknesses. And I liked their love which was so much stronger than anything. I think I will decide to consider this ending a happy one even if it breaks my heart. I have faith in what they are having:)
All in all, wow. Is this really the end? I don't want it to be the end:) Well, even if it is I'm happy I had the chance to follow this until the end. I love when a fic makes me think, makes me smile or cry (yes, you heard it right) , reminds me of my own feelings. I felt very attached to these characters and this story. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I enjoyed every single word of it until this moment.
And thank you for the dedication, it feels so good to be mentioned there, like I'm kind of part of this story somehow *laughs*
Oh my. This is probably one of the longest comments I've ever gotten. Probably only blue_eye1 and queen-chan beat you, but.. i wouldn't bet! My.. and... it took me ages to get around to answer this! Please don't think I forget about this! I wouldn't ever! I am sorry >__<
I do understand that you can't re-read it, that's fine. It must have been hurting enough the first time. However, it's amazing just how much stayed on your mind ♥ I am very, very sorry, however, for making you cry ;_; i didn't mean to!
You're not the only one bringing kizuna up and I think that's quite lovely, since I didn't actually think of it, but looking at it now, it does suit this just so well. They do share a special bond and I think after everything they've been through in this, everyting they overcame together they both pretty well realised that they share something really special and that it's deep and essential.
Saying this was realistic is the nicest and most treasured ompliment you could pay me... It's what I want my writing to be like and finding it reaches you that way, makes me more than happy ♥ Thank you!
Well, kame always tried to act reasonably and correctly in this, but he again and again forgot that feelings aren't. He got struck down and caught by his feelings overa nd over again. You can't push someone away, if you hold on tightly yourself. Kazuya probably didn't realise that simple fact until the end.
I should put this under "tragedy", indeed. because everything in this is just so tragic. they went through so much trouble, fought so sternly, and in the end, they still had to part. Poor boys, it#s really tragic.
Well, I consider this an open ending and in my mind, in my head, there's the scene, where someday Jin finally comes home, uses his key to open the door and gives back kazuya's. And is greeted with a warm and loving "Okaeri". Kazuya was clever enough to give Jin that picture, to indirectly express that way what Jin wanted to hear all the while. Indirectly telling Jin, he would wait. Well, Kazuya was once again too proud to speak it out loud, but he could make that move and it was probably even better than saying it, because this way, Jin won't ahve a single doubt and won't forget for sure.
I consider this an ending. But... well, it's been a week and there are a million possibilities in my mind how this could continue. I will watch those two as closely as I always did and see, if there's more to write about in the future ;) We'll see.
It's me who has to thank you. You always stayed with me, supported me so much and gave me encouragement over such a long time. Thank you so much for that! I am happy you didn't get bored and read this until the end ♥
First of all, I apologize but I can't read this again now. I'm sure you know the reason and understand me (I woke up with puffy eyes T_T). I know that I'm going to read the whole thing again soon (just like I did with the main story) but right now the wounds are still fresh. *cries*
Despite all the crying and my whining yesterday, I really think that your ending couldn't be better, more realistic and more appropriate. Because what the hell? We know Akame, right (okay, we think we do) and Akame is just like how you portrayed them (in my mind they are); angsty, deep, controversial, painful and never-ending. I think whatever those two people had between them will never end even if they are not together anymore. Somehow, though it sounds cheesy, I find the lyrics of Kizuna so appropriate to describe their relationship. Their bonds will never disappear, whatever that bond is.
Uhm.. back to the point. I must repeat my favorite comment to you, that is, you write so realistically, throughout these wonderful journey that was this fic, I could feel so attached to them, I laughed and cried and loved these characters. I don't really want to let them go:)
Kame was the biggest mystery for me for the whole time yet Jin surprised me the most at the end:) I understood Kame's feelings, I understood his mistakes yet I didn't agree with the way he wanted to solve problems. Yet I cannot say I would do otherwise, I felt his desperation to make this relationship work. And life is so unfair. They managed to overcome so many difficulties and be mature about it, yet now they have to face something that is not within their control. This is tragic. Tragic. You should use the genre "tragedy" because it is!
And Jin. I liked his ideas and efforts, all his weaknesses. And I liked their love which was so much stronger than anything. I think I will decide to consider this ending a happy one even if it breaks my heart. I have faith in what they are having:)
All in all, wow. Is this really the end? I don't want it to be the end:) Well, even if it is I'm happy I had the chance to follow this until the end. I love when a fic makes me think, makes me smile or cry (yes, you heard it right) , reminds me of my own feelings. I felt very attached to these characters and this story. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I enjoyed every single word of it until this moment.
And thank you for the dedication, it feels so good to be mentioned there, like I'm kind of part of this story somehow *laughs*
Much love &hearts&hearts&hearts
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My.. and... it took me ages to get around to answer this! Please don't think I forget about this! I wouldn't ever! I am sorry >__<
I do understand that you can't re-read it, that's fine. It must have been hurting enough the first time.
However, it's amazing just how much stayed on your mind ♥
I am very, very sorry, however, for making you cry ;_; i didn't mean to!
You're not the only one bringing kizuna up and I think that's quite lovely, since I didn't actually think of it, but looking at it now, it does suit this just so well. They do share a special bond and I think after everything they've been through in this, everyting they overcame together they both pretty well realised that they share something really special and that it's deep and essential.
Saying this was realistic is the nicest and most treasured ompliment you could pay me... It's what I want my writing to be like and finding it reaches you that way, makes me more than happy ♥ Thank you!
Well, kame always tried to act reasonably and correctly in this, but he again and again forgot that feelings aren't. He got struck down and caught by his feelings overa nd over again. You can't push someone away, if you hold on tightly yourself. Kazuya probably didn't realise that simple fact until the end.
I should put this under "tragedy", indeed. because everything in this is just so tragic. they went through so much trouble, fought so sternly, and in the end, they still had to part. Poor boys, it#s really tragic.
Well, I consider this an open ending and in my mind, in my head, there's the scene, where someday Jin finally comes home, uses his key to open the door and gives back kazuya's. And is greeted with a warm and loving "Okaeri".
Kazuya was clever enough to give Jin that picture, to indirectly express that way what Jin wanted to hear all the while. Indirectly telling Jin, he would wait. Well, Kazuya was once again too proud to speak it out loud, but he could make that move and it was probably even better than saying it, because this way, Jin won't ahve a single doubt and won't forget for sure.
I consider this an ending. But... well, it's been a week and there are a million possibilities in my mind how this could continue. I will watch those two as closely as I always did and see, if there's more to write about in the future ;) We'll see.
It's me who has to thank you. You always stayed with me, supported me so much and gave me encouragement over such a long time. Thank you so much for that! I am happy you didn't get bored and read this until the end ♥
The dedication is just a given.
Love you, dear! Thanks for everything ♥♥♥♥
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