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Kamen /// Fifth Feeling: Missing

Oct 15, 2009 00:46

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akameonly October 15 2009, 01:12:49 UTC

its soo good to know that not only Kazuya could feel broken after Jin's playful ways...
Jin feels too..and he feels hard...

thanks so much for the update♥

yumiko_okahawa October 15 2009, 20:14:33 UTC

Yeah, I think all this confuses Jin's feeling to a degree that makes him just as insane as kazuya v.v
They both can't handle being apart, but also they can't handle being together right now *sigh*

Thanks so much for reading ^_^

♥

crovoxisikes October 15 2009, 01:20:40 UTC

yes..i blame it on kazuya!!!!! :) the tension..uwa~~~~~loving it :) oh, and yes, it's HOT!! :)

yumiko_okahawa October 15 2009, 20:16:24 UTC

Haha, yes, this time around it was kazuya... but it didn't go that well~ I pity both of them v.v

thanks so very much! ^^

csaca October 15 2009, 01:36:39 UTC

Huh... *trying to breathe* huh... It was... lot... lot things happened... I thought it'll an angst and thinking chapter not an active like this.
What Kazuya did it was disgusting, yeah. I thought so like Jin. But maybe I understand him so much... it was an insane thing, but he missed Jin like an insane, ne?
And Jin.. my love... he beats my heart always when he is cold like this... iceberg with fire inside... when he grabbed Kazuya's wrist (L) but after the blow job he was again just an icebreg... Kame is pathetic but Jin as well. I understand his feelings, his pride and that he can't trust now, but I feel sorry Kame. Sorry that he has to do insane thing like this.

I'm really curios what'll happen ^^
thanks dear <3

yumiko_okahawa October 15 2009, 20:20:05 UTC

I guess the next one is more of a thoughtful chapter than this. I wanted to actually let a lot of things happen between them to get to the point Jin stands in at by the end of the next chapter. I've already written it and I guess it'll turn out different from what you guys expected again, but well... we'll see ^^

It was. I thought the same. But that's why I let him do it. I wanted to show off that kazuya is completely obsessed with his love for Jin. So obsessed that it would make him go insane.

Thanks so much for reading on. i am glad you still like it :)

helbus_421 October 15 2009, 02:18:19 UTC

Kame's so daring doing that to Jin but he knew what would happen if Jin saw him. >< sighs, is Jin that insecure about their love that he cant trust Kame again. but i feel so heart broken for Kame, he maid one mistake and now its all over. T_T i hope not to read another angsty chapter cause i dont think my dear heart can take it any more. -3-

yumiko_okahawa October 15 2009, 20:22:12 UTC

Kazuya knew exactly, but still he couldn't resist v.v And he loves Jin, so it was hard on him too, to be treatened like that *sigh*

Oh, well... since the next chapter is already complete I hope you will still read it. Things definitely take a change, but probably into another direction than you had thought ^^;

Thanks a lot for reading!

snow_meow October 15 2009, 02:26:24 UTC

They are both nuts.
Kame's possessive trait is scary until he would go to the extreme.
I guess emotions are a powerful thing which doesn't makes sense to anyone else but the person feeling it.

I wonder will Kame be able to control his emotions before it gets out of control.

Then again Jin is stupid. His pride is getting in the way of things.

yumiko_okahawa October 15 2009, 20:24:24 UTC

How I love you for saying Kame was possessive. Actually, that is what the next chapter revolves around. Kame being obsessively possessive. That was kind of my original idea for this fanfiction and it took me a while to actually get to that point... O.o

Thanks so much for this comment! It's lovely!!!