Kamen /// Third Feeling: Deceit

[green_feelings]

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[aarime]

ahh...Kame what did u do ?kissing uchi? I hope it wont cause a problem kater between them...
But at leat they understand they cant be without each other ... Waitind next one!!

[yumiko_okahawa]

Well, so, after all, it was kame v.v
Thanks so much for reading! I'll update soon again ^__^

[crovoxisikes]

wow..this chapter is quite long..andandand..ANGST!!!!! yay :) as usual, i love your writing..can't wait to know what will happen btw kame and uchi..will be waiting for the next chapter :)

[yumiko_okahawa]

it was, wasn't it? But I had so much in my head I wanted to happen, so... well, it got that long ^^;
Haha, btw kame and Uch, huh? Hm, well, I guess it'll focus more on Jin and Kame, because btw them theres's going to happen a lot *laugh*

Thanks so very much for reading!

[crovoxisikes]

i want akame too :) no way in hell other pair top akame :) it's just that i'm quite curious about uchi+kame..i rarely read about this pair :)

[blazingeternity]

T__T;; *sob* Breath-taking!
When the story turned from Jin's night out where he drops a girl to Kame's night out with a fellow idol he likes... and after your comment where you said he'd be totally different from anything before... I thought "WHOW! No way! She's gonna let Kame be the one making a mistake!?" and then that - stunning! My jaw dropped *lol* But somehow I can totally understand how he felt in that moment <.<;
And how this turned out, how he hates himself for doubting Jin's love and then returns all the way to Tokyo to watch Jin and kind of test him to reassure himself and Jin's super amazing final words - I honestly, honestly love it! Just...
that it also scares me because it's obviously not gonna be all lovey-dovey and there's enough space for more angst and hurt and suffering. And what about poor Uchi who cannot know why Kame suddenly felt guilty about it?
What's next? What's next? What's next?!? D:

(I'll answer your comments later, gotta go to the supermarket immediately XD)
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[yumiko_okahawa]

Kame had to do a mistake, just to make the whole thing more exciting later on. I feel bad for both of them, especially for Jin, since he doesn't know about that yet.
.... O_O WAAAAH! Did you just write you totally understand Kame??? *löl* ooh, that's so new to me!

Yes, poor Uchi. I can't involve him too much, because I like Uchi and I don't want him to suffer ;_; Uchii~ *dies*

Next comes up soon, hopefully, since I won't have internet in Kiel this week, I guess <.< I want to post it before Monday, hope I'll manage it ^^;;;

(It's okay, I'm sooooo behind, I feel bad v.v)

*snuggles*
I LOVE YOU. Just so you know.
♥♥♥

[blazingeternity]

(lol, that was a really long trip to the supermarket @_@)

*hands up* ...wait! I said "I totally understand how he felt" not that I understand him. No need to be alarmed, I'm still myself! XDDD *rofl*
Even if your writing seems tempting from time to time, I'm not going to change fronts *laughs*

Right, it's enough if Jin and Kame have to suffer... no need to draw other boys in o_o it's kind of strange to think that about an on-going fictional story, but I hope something good happens to Uchi, that he understands why Kame acted like that and finds his own happiness xP *drop* It's always so sad if someone happens to fall for someone who's struggling with another love at that moment ;_;

Good luck with writing/updating as you planned and no need to feel bad *hugs you tightly & doesn't let go*

And I love you back. Period. *chuuu~* ♥

[csaca]

*moaning... moaning... * uwwaa~~~~~~ I think I saw too many eating-show recently because my first thought was umai~~~~~ and the moans in the end x"D

I love this chapter, it was the best up to this point ^^ They fought and angst but made it up *soo happy* And the things what Kazu thought were very real! When a relationship is "used to" really hard to not think the love is gone already.

And I have to say, I always love your Jin! His personality and behavior make me love him so much again and again. I think his pride is more important to him then we can imagine... But for Kame!! he can call, and can run to Osaka, and any other things (L) Because he loves him! I love Jin when he loves Kame :D

I'm waiting how they will make his relationship again better ^^

Request: please not more UchiKame X"D

[yumiko_okahawa]

*löl* Okay, that makes sense ^-^

That's so true. But Kazuya realized after all that "used to" doesn't mean it got less. But still, kissing Uchi was a huge mistake and something that can't be easily forgotten v.v

Thanks so much for saying this! It's actually quite difficult for me to write Jin... since he's so very indifferent in his looks. He's always cool and so... I don't know, sometimes kind of emotionless. That makes it hard to write him affectionate and warm, but i guess, when it comes to Kame he can be like that. Just a little ^^

"I love Jin when he loves Kame" that#s something good to say :)

Thanks so much for reading:

PS: I couldn't do that, since I don't want Uchi to be too hurt v.v

PPS: Your icon... that picture of jin is just so very beautiful. I LOVE it. ♥

[csaca]

I love it too ^^ Nowadays he is more beautiful than ever :)

*running to post the translation :D*

[akabelle]

so exiting! I want to read more ^^

I feel bad for jin and kame, even though they love each other so much they can't express themselves...and kame kissed uchi! that was a big surprise!

thanks for another great chapter <3
looking forward to next ^__^

[yumiko_okahawa]

Ha, yes, i wanted a surprise, I'm glad it worked ou! ^^

Thank you so much for reading :)
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