shivering in space [Lost Luau. sci fi fusion crossover. Richard, Ensemble]

[greedyslayer]

Title: shivering in space
Previously: we have to go back
Summary: [AU fusion crossover with "Samurai Jack" and other sci fi stuff, including "Star Wars."] Ricardo, Jacob, Miles, Daniel, Charlotte, and Naomi hijack a spaceship while rescuing Frank.
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Richard, Miles, Dan/Charlotte, Naomi, Frank, Jacob
Rating: PG-13
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Comments

[valhalla37]

I'm running a little short on time, but I just wanted to pop in and say this is AWESOME times a million, and I adore it, and I'll be back with more ASAP. ;D

[valhalla37]

(Okay, so I'm back! ;D)

First off, thank you SO MUCH for delving into this universe again -- you're right, I totally loved the last one, and it was so cool to see you explore it a little bit more.

Like last time, I love the group dynamics you've set up, and the interplay between all the characters -- the bickering, the snarkiness about Richard's clothing; and I love that Naomi and Jacob are the one to bring order to things, and that Frank's just doing his piloting thing, and Dan and Charlotte are so adorable. And the huddling together for warmth! Hee! Best trope ever, and I love how you use it here.

And the action! I love that it shifts to this sort of tense pace -- very, very Star Wars-esque, in a great way -- and Miles, Daniel and Richard fumbling around in the engine room was just note-perfect. And the numbers showing it! It's got me so, so curious how Lost's bigger mythology is potentially tied up in what's happening, and Richard and Jacob's story.

This was especially awesome, too: But Charlotte raced down and pulled Dan

[greedyslayer]

(Glad you're back, love getting your in-depth comments, let's me know what I did well :D)

Should I let you know the next time I explore this 'verse more?

and I love that Naomi and Jacob are the one to bring order to things I liked adding that part too, it seemed to fit them IMO, but now I'm starting to randomly ship them. XD They would get along fairly well in this 'verse.

And the numbers showing it! It's got me so, so curious how Lost's bigger mythology is potentially tied up in what's happening, and Richard and Jacob's story. That image's been in my head for a while, so I'm really glad I worked it in this. I'm still working on it, but I think I almost have an idea of what I want to do with twisting that part of the Lost mythology for this 'verse

[valhalla37]

(Jeeze, sorry it's taken so long for me to respond -- I got your comment when RL was nuts, and then I was on a bit of a hiatus.)

Absolutely, you should! I really love the fic you've been writing for this. :D

I'm wondering, where is Naomi's last comment that you're referring to? I'm embarrassed to say, I'm not sure which part of hers you're talking about; Naomi unfortunately kinda seems to fade away in the end

Eek, sorry! My brain meant Miles and then Naomi came out ... apparently shouldn't write fic feedback after a long day at work. ;D