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two_grey_rooms in greatpoets

Oct 12, 2008 16:15

"The arsonist stood up in court and said ( Read more... )

Comments 14

anaisf October 12 2008, 20:25:53 UTC

I really like this, thanks!

two_grey_rooms October 12 2008, 20:55:50 UTC

I've got a thing for batshit-insane narrators with delusions of grandeur, and I thought this was kind of superb. I'm glad you enjoyed it too :D.

nostoi October 12 2008, 21:11:06 UTC

I really like this, thanks for sharing. Does it have a name?

two_grey_rooms October 12 2008, 21:23:22 UTC

"The arsonist stood up in court and said"

Also, I really love your user name.

nostoi October 12 2008, 21:51:27 UTC

Oops, didn't get that that was the title! :D

Thanks :)

57r4n63 October 12 2008, 21:44:25 UTC

Loved the imagery and the narrator's perspective.

nostoi October 12 2008, 21:52:30 UTC

Me too, especially...

people
leaping from windows, like lightning
bolts somersaulting out of a terrible cloud

57r4n63 October 12 2008, 22:14:58 UTC

The description was really rich. Like a cake.
I'm partial to the bit on the homeless butterfly and missing marbles.

rajmahall October 12 2008, 21:51:31 UTC

I don't know, I'm not really feeling this.

whatofthenight October 12 2008, 22:53:12 UTC

ah wonderful. i saw him read last night, actually.