What do think of this poem?

[great_beyond]

Sometimes it so hard
Its all around you
you can smell it
you can taste
you can't escape
but the only thing stopping you
is you
it would be so easy to give up
but you know you can't
cause when you do
the world will come crashing down on you
and who you were will never be the same
and you cant go back even if you tried
the bridge has collasped
and you went down with it.

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