First off, this chapter stylistically flowed much better than the others. I was taken back to the glory of your other one shots. lol
Also I need you to know that everything that happened in here is one of my favorite tropes/scenarios. :)
Seriously though, the development of feelings was more pronounced here and definitely draws the reader in. You kind of have to continue now because I got invested. Rude.
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Also I need you to know that everything that happened in here is one of my favorite tropes/scenarios. :)
Seriously though, the development of feelings was more pronounced here and definitely draws the reader in. You kind of have to continue now because I got invested. Rude.
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