more to come

[grayshame]

Comments

[_secondbest]

I like it.

OKay

[crazyexpansive]

I like it so much that I will tell you to keep writing. I actually fell into your story quite a bit and was surrounded by the plot and colors and tones of voice. I think you should write me a short love story, or something, cause I would definitely read it and give you feedback.
actually, just keep up with the wonderfully done, descriptive writing. Your style is pretty cool.
later