Here it is!!

[grayhammer]

Ok kiddies here is the fisrt chapter to FIST OF AVALON. Meaghen thinks t has a nice porn title, but i orignaly had it this way so i'm going to keep it this way for now. DESTINED FOR AVALON is another title meaghen likes better, so we will see. Comments are welcome. If it appears to look odd, its because i just copied and paist from Word. Anyway

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[grayhammer]

I know with the proof reading, that what matts helping me alot with, needs his oproval so to speak. The way im writing it, im writing it as a noval, i cant get the detail i want to portray with a screenplay, so im writing it as a book. This chapter is the hook chapter so to call it. All of the questions you want answered will come in the next couple of chapters. The fisrt chapter is going to be edited for cleaness and flow, everything in the chapter will stay and nothing wil be added except some words that im going to exchange for the extensive repeatative word rock outcroping. I will have to be more creative, and it was sugested i get rid of the he said and she said as well. But i'm very glad you like it or luve it so far. I have a couple of friends and my parents are hooked and asking me questions. My mom is a little upset that i wont answer any of her questions its kinda of funny.
My goal is to write a chapter per week. During break i hope to get done quite a bit. Hell the way its going so far and the detail and protrail of events matt and i have planed, it will be a good three hundered page book when we get done. My goal is to have it done by the end of april/early may and i want to send it to several publishers. But who knows my our lives lol. chat with you later.

naTe