OKAY. SO HI. I’M FOREVER LATE WITH EVERYTHING IN THIS WORLD BUT HAI. ;A;
He ignores the ground that is literally crumbling beneath his feet as he starts screaming towards the sky. His breathing is ragged when he finishes shouting for a god that no longer wishes to communicate with him.
The world, for Jiho, ends on a Friday afternoon. I’ve already told you that I absolutely love this line. It ties in wonderfully with the title, and it’s like this one sentence that just makes you stop. It just encompassed the whole result of everything that had happened to Jiho beforehand, and it’s just heartbreaking really.
And Jiho took over in place of Woo Jiho.I love how you just pointed out what had happened with this one line, revealing everything, yet at the same time, not revealing enough. I love the difference between the two Jihos, based on the fact that you had used his surname, which, in my opinion, makes him seem so much more normal that Jiho; as if he is just ‘normal school kid Woo Jiho, who has a family, and a best friend, and leads a
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“Same to you guys.” Taeil waves farewell as the pair leave the store. “I hope you win your ‘hide and seek’ game.” When the door closes shut, he adds, “I’d like to challenge you guys to a game too.” When I had first read this, I had just thought that Taeil was really innocent in wanting to join in on the ‘fun’/their game, and that he was just weird, but now, seeing as I’ve already read this, I just can’t help but think; OH MY GOSH. TAEIL. THIS IS FORESHADOWING, I THINK; WELL IT IS TO ME AND OH MY GOSH THIS IS FLAWLESS AND OH MY HEART ;A; TEARS. TEARSSSSSS. TAEIL. YOU ARE SO MUCH MORE EVIL THAN YOU HAD INITIALLY HAD LET ON AND SOB.
A question he now knows the answer to. DID NO ONE EVER TELL YOU, WOO JIHO, THAT IT ISN’T GOOD TO HIDE THE TRUTH AND TO KEEP SECRETS FROM YOUR BEST FRIEND?!
“Hello, I’m Kim Yukwon. I’m Minhyuk’s best friend, and I also really like dancing.”U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-
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You know when something is so confusing because it’s written badly, and you can’t make sense of anything, not because you’re not reading deep enough into it, or because it’s supposed to be a cliffhanger, but because there is really not enough to base anything on; and it’s written so terribly, that it’s confusing and there’s not enough written to make you understand?
This fic is nothing like that.
I really do love this fic, Julia ^^ It’s really well written and sfdljkkljkjldslkjsd. Instead, this fic is so well written, and the plot is confusing, and I love it. But when I read over it again, I got hit with this realisation, and everything managed to slot itself together, and everything just fit and made sense, and that’s what makes this fic amazing. (Basically, you write well and make me cry, ahahhaa
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I don't deserve your love. /gross sobbing You are abusing such lovely compliments by throwing them my way. Eep. But I'm really grateful you weren't put off by your confusion towards this fic, and I'm also grateful that you gave this fic a chance (since I know you were eyeing it warily due to its rating). You're too good to me. Thank you so much for your ridiculously kind comments.
It’s even more sad for Jiho, because he needs to keep doing this. He’s gone through it more times that Kyung has, and I guess it must really be tiring, this continuous need to have to start his life over, because things have never really gone to plan. It’s as if Kyung and Jiho are just caught in this endless cycle of heartbreak.I think you're the only one who's pointed out the possibility of there not being a happy ending their third time around. Not gonna comment much else on that. The ending is certainly open to interpretation. (Except that, look at you! Stringing together beautiful sentences again in your attempt to read into the characters! Heheh
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YES THAT WAS FORESHADOWING. I'm glad you noticed it in my writing. Whoo~ All my AP English classes are paying off now, haha.
ICU. AND YOUR U-BOMB BIAS.
YES. YOUNHA IS THE BEST (and her interactions with Block B on her radio show, baw). HAVE YOU LISTENED TO HER RECENT ALBUM YET? ;A; OR WATCHED HER ON IMMORTAL SONG 2? ;A; (NEGL, I now ship SunggyuXYounha. And it isn't even as if they interact that much on the show. :|)
Okay. I’m probably ruining this whole effect with the creepy/mysterious cloaks in a dark room etc etc; but I can’t help but picture the beginning of EXO’s Mama MV, with their long cloaks hahahah. /CHOKES ON SALIVA.
YEAH, I originally had more ideas for how TaePyo's relationship would play out, but then I scrapped it - finding it unnecessary and whatnot. (But - fun fact! - Taeil was close to Jihoon before the games~!!!)
HOLY CRAPPOLA HI I AM TERRIBLY LATE WITH THIS REPLY TO YOUR MORE THAN LOVELY COMMENT.
Ahaha, I think I told you this on Twitter, but I didn't even know what to title this fic until the very end of the whole fic-writing process. So I'm glad you thought this was aptly titled, really, since I was struggling for so long as for I should title this. :)
ASDFGHJKL is it bad that I'm really proud that you pointed out the difference in how I named the two Jihos and managed to see the intent behind it? But no, you made perfect sense and I'm really happy you liked that. ;u;
GLAD YOU LIKE ALL THE BROTP ACTION GOING ON - either between ZiKyung or TaeHyo. IT'S OKAY, DON'T BE ASHAMED. SHOUT YOUR LOVE FOR BROMANCES ALL OVER THE WORLD~ \O/
Hahaha, I'm glad you found it fitting that Kyung linked Jiho to, well, everything really.
AND WHAT ARE YOU SOB. POINTING OUT MY BIAS AND MY LOVE FOR AQUATIC ANIMALS AND EVERYTHING. CRYING AT YOU. ;;;;;
He ignores the ground that is literally crumbling beneath his feet as he starts screaming towards the sky. His breathing is ragged when he finishes shouting for a god that no longer wishes to communicate with him.
The world, for Jiho, ends on a Friday afternoon.
I’ve already told you that I absolutely love this line. It ties in wonderfully with the title, and it’s like this one sentence that just makes you stop. It just encompassed the whole result of everything that had happened to Jiho beforehand, and it’s just heartbreaking really.
And Jiho took over in place of Woo Jiho.I love how you just pointed out what had happened with this one line, revealing everything, yet at the same time, not revealing enough. I love the difference between the two Jihos, based on the fact that you had used his surname, which, in my opinion, makes him seem so much more normal that Jiho; as if he is just ‘normal school kid Woo Jiho, who has a family, and a best friend, and leads a ( ... )
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When I had first read this, I had just thought that Taeil was really innocent in wanting to join in on the ‘fun’/their game, and that he was just weird, but now, seeing as I’ve already read this, I just can’t help but think; OH MY GOSH. TAEIL. THIS IS FORESHADOWING, I THINK; WELL IT IS TO ME AND OH MY GOSH THIS IS FLAWLESS AND OH MY HEART ;A; TEARS. TEARSSSSSS. TAEIL. YOU ARE SO MUCH MORE EVIL THAN YOU HAD INITIALLY HAD LET ON AND SOB.
A question he now knows the answer to.
DID NO ONE EVER TELL YOU, WOO JIHO, THAT IT ISN’T GOOD TO HIDE THE TRUTH AND TO KEEP SECRETS FROM YOUR BEST FRIEND?!
“Hello, I’m Kim Yukwon. I’m Minhyuk’s best friend, and I also really like dancing.”U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U- ( ... )
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This fic is nothing like that.
I really do love this fic, Julia ^^ It’s really well written and sfdljkkljkjldslkjsd. Instead, this fic is so well written, and the plot is confusing, and I love it. But when I read over it again, I got hit with this realisation, and everything managed to slot itself together, and everything just fit and made sense, and that’s what makes this fic amazing. (Basically, you write well and make me cry, ahahhaa ( ... )
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You are abusing such lovely compliments by throwing them my way. Eep. But I'm really grateful you weren't put off by your confusion towards this fic, and I'm also grateful that you gave this fic a chance (since I know you were eyeing it warily due to its rating). You're too good to me. Thank you so much for your ridiculously kind comments.
It’s even more sad for Jiho, because he needs to keep doing this. He’s gone through it more times that Kyung has, and I guess it must really be tiring, this continuous need to have to start his life over, because things have never really gone to plan. It’s as if Kyung and Jiho are just caught in this endless cycle of heartbreak.I think you're the only one who's pointed out the possibility of there not being a happy ending their third time around. Not gonna comment much else on that. The ending is certainly open to interpretation. (Except that, look at you! Stringing together beautiful sentences again in your attempt to read into the characters! Heheh ( ... )
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ICU. AND YOUR U-BOMB BIAS.
YES. YOUNHA IS THE BEST (and her interactions with Block B on her radio show, baw). HAVE YOU LISTENED TO HER RECENT ALBUM YET? ;A; OR WATCHED HER ON IMMORTAL SONG 2? ;A; (NEGL, I now ship SunggyuXYounha. And it isn't even as if they interact that much on the show. :|)
Okay. I’m probably ruining this whole effect with the creepy/mysterious cloaks in a dark room etc etc; but I can’t help but picture the beginning of EXO’s Mama MV, with their long cloaks hahahah.
/CHOKES ON SALIVA.
YEAH, I originally had more ideas for how TaePyo's relationship would play out, but then I scrapped it - finding it unnecessary and whatnot. (But - fun fact! - Taeil was close to Jihoon before the games~!!!)
HAVE YOU LISTENED TO PHANTOM'S MINI-ALBUM~~~? :D
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Ahaha, I think I told you this on Twitter, but I didn't even know what to title this fic until the very end of the whole fic-writing process. So I'm glad you thought this was aptly titled, really, since I was struggling for so long as for I should title this. :)
ASDFGHJKL is it bad that I'm really proud that you pointed out the difference in how I named the two Jihos and managed to see the intent behind it? But no, you made perfect sense and I'm really happy you liked that. ;u;
GLAD YOU LIKE ALL THE BROTP ACTION GOING ON - either between ZiKyung or TaeHyo. IT'S OKAY, DON'T BE ASHAMED. SHOUT YOUR LOVE FOR BROMANCES ALL OVER THE WORLD~ \O/
Hahaha, I'm glad you found it fitting that Kyung linked Jiho to, well, everything really.
AND WHAT ARE YOU SOB. POINTING OUT MY BIAS AND MY LOVE FOR AQUATIC ANIMALS AND EVERYTHING. CRYING AT YOU. ;;;;;
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