Comments | grapefruitade: one-shot; past in present, rated PG

grapefruitade

one-shot; past in present, rated PG

Dec 11, 2011 21:22

title: Past in Present
rating: PG
pairing: Jaehyo/Zico
genre: Fluff
summary: High School!AU - A picture can tell a thousand words. A photo album, even moreso.
length: 2,208 words

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fanfics, pairing: jaehyo/zico, oneshots

Comments 6

evange_lynne December 15 2011, 07:29:56 UTC

aww this is just too cute ;A; so precious, Zico hitting Jaehyo in the face with the present (lol, NOT THE FACE XD)
my favorite part: "It looks stupid." the younger smirked.
The older's face fell (he always had been a sensitive one).
"It needs cannon balls to go 'pew pew pew."
it made go alfalfalfjlakfj ;A; it's just so cute.

Sorry for the useless comment, but I love your ficcie n_n

grapefruitade December 20 2011, 01:58:06 UTC

PSHAW, there is no such thing as a useless comment ;3;
thank you for reading (and commenting) <3

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Re: THE STRUCTURE OH MY GODDDD grapefruitade December 20 2011, 02:13:58 UTC

Thank you! When I initially approached this, as a simple idea in my head, I was so unsure about how to pace things. I'm glad you liked the structure!

Just imagine Jiho in a Home Ec. as the only guy slaving over a cake.Kyung was a little ticked. Just a little. His best friend, Jiho, had asked him to wait for him, but it felt like the boy was taking forever. Kyung sighed as he walked around the school, aimlessly scrolling through text messages (and pondering ways to throttle Jiho when he next saw him - hey, he was missing a meeting for this). Soon, however, Kyung noticed a group of girls gathering around an open door. The girls all spoke in hushed whispers as they peered in from the doorframe. Curious, Kyung too looked in and the sight that he saw made him cover his mouth to stifle his laughter ( ... )

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