Enchanted, parts 17-20

[kribu]

Title: Enchanted
Team Name: Spy for the Order
Word Count: 4x100
Rating: G
Challenge: Bookmark challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus
A/N: Post-DH (epilogue ignored). Parts 1-4 can be found here, parts 5-8 here, parts 9-12 here and parts 13-16 hereHermione fidgeted with the bookmark, unsure what to do. If she was honest with herself, she knew she

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[hope_24]

*Wails with frustration* ;)

Looking forward to more.

[kribu]

But see, it's actually moving forward! ;-)

[septentrion1970]

Now, you've definitively earned yourself the nickname of "tease".

[kribu]

Hah! Would you believe me if I said I didn't do it on purpose? ;-)

[septentrion1970]

benefit of the doubt?

[ayerf]

And... what happens next? *wails*

I'm not sure what to call the endings of these drabbles, because they're not cliffies as I know/write them. They're more subtle, somehow. But still playing with the readers like a cat with a mouse!

You sure you're spying for the right team?

[kribu]

And... what happens next? *wails*

Things happen. *nods*

They're not real cliffies, no... I tend to call them "suitable places where to stop for the day".

And good question...

[droxy]

You sure you're spying for the right team?

she's not!

I wonder....hmmm

[kribu]

Hmm... now this sounds suspicious. Just what are you wondering about?

*looks shifty*

[dickgloucester]

I saw this had posted and went "Ooh, goody!" Love it. The slight humour of Hermione wondering if his almost smile is nerve damage; the stomach flip-flop moment of that appraising look he gives her... More! Pleeeeeeaase!

[kribu]

I'm glad you liked those bits - they were fun to write. It's so hard to get little details like that into drabbles, when there's supposed to be a plot I should be getting on with!

[sbrande]

And Damn You yet again... I'll finish it for you,

"I had created a portal, if you will, that allows one person access to me however, they must mean me no harm.

Hermione cocked her head to the side. 'Did he just say what I think he said?' she asked herself as she continued to stare into the blackness that were his eyes.....

I could keep on going but I don't want to ruin it for the readers.

Love you, Sonia :)

[kribu]

I rather like that version! :-D

Want to finish it for me properly? ;-)

[sbrande]

Nah... I don't drabble... Feel free to use it though :)

I was just being an idiot as I had just woken up and hadn't had my coffee yet.

Love Sonia :)

[kribu]

Why don't you drabble? It's fun! :-D

And thanks for the permission - if I didn't have a certain direction in mind already, this would have been a good way to solve things!