Haunted, parts 10-12

[kribu]

Title: Haunted
Team Name: Spy for the Order
Word Count: 3x100
Rating: G
Challenge: Haunted House challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus
A/N: Post-DH. Previous sets can be found here (1-3), here (4-6) and here (7-9)He stopped abruptly, as if he’d realised he had already said more than he had intended

Comments

[camillo1978]

That last one. That hit the spot completely. Excellent.

[kribu]

Thank you! The last one finally got me to one of the points where I originally intended to get, so I'm glad it worked.

[kribu]

Thanks! I'm curious too - the muse seems to be dictating the course it's taking, and it's not telling me everything yet.

[septentrion1970]

Well, Hermione needs to find a way to have Severus's rest in peace and leave this half-life of his.

[kribu]

If only that were so easy... I'm sure she'll want to do something to help him though.

[firefly124]

Excellent.

‘Disliked - hated - by everyone, doomed to spend the eternity facing the reason for his guilt.’

That just cut right to the bone.

[kribu]

Thank you. I hoped the last line would work!

[duniazade]

Excellent. The last line is superb.

[kribu]

Thanks. :-) I'm really glad to know it worked.