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Furry Matchmaking (9-13)

Nov 25, 2006 12:15

Title: Furry Matchmaking
Team Name: Death Eaters
Word Count: 5*100 (perhaps complete)
Rating: G
Challenge : Crookshanks
Characters : Severus, Hermione, and Crookshanks
Author's note : beta'ed by

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benebu November 25 2006, 11:38:43 UTC

Didn't you copy/paste in a hurry ? Because it doesn't seem like the end to me, and there are more than three drabbles in there...

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 11:57:00 UTC

Oups... ther are five indeed. I'm going to edit this. But it really is the end, or would you like to know what Crooks will do to distract Ron from Hermione? He's just put Hermione and Severus face to face, without anyone to interfere, and with a purpose to meet again. He's convinced everything's going to work out just fine after their meeting. Anyway, if you have suggestions...

benebu November 25 2006, 11:39:01 UTC

I love this storyline, and I hope you'll have time to work on it during the week-end. Crooks has something on his mind, and I can't help being impatient to know what he has in mind for the 'red-headed git'...

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 12:00:09 UTC

OK, so you want to know. But it's not sure that I'll ever write more. I wanted an open ending, and I have work to do on my French stories. Perhaps later, if the plot bunnies strike.

benebu November 25 2006, 13:03:10 UTC

I like the 'perhaps complete'... I'll do my damnedest to keep this plot bunny alive. Like... talking about it in the middle of a conversation about something else, to make sure it stays on your mind, you know...

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 15:55:37 UTC

Well, now, because of you, I wonder if I won't make it a full-fledged story, and not just drabbles.

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snapeophile November 25 2006, 14:32:20 UTC

I know I said this before but I love your 'voice' of Crookshanks. That cat is so sure of himself and his machinations!

I agree heartily with Benebu--it's cruel to leave us dangling like this regarding Crooks and Ron--I'm a big fan of leaving 'open' endings, but this one's a yawning chasm which needs to be continued!

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 16:11:50 UTC

Thank you for your comment.

I should be wary of your comments, last time you advised me to write a story from a cluster of drabbles, I couldn't resist. The result is now on TPP (and some others). Now, you and benebu are tempting me in writing a whole story ... again! **new mantra: keep the plot bunnies at bay, keep the plot bunnies at bay, ...**

snapeophile November 26 2006, 02:32:51 UTC

*squees* I remember that drabbles series well. What's the title of your story so I can go and enjoy it? ;-) 'phile

septentrion1970 November 26 2006, 09:00:24 UTC

The story has the same title than the drabbles, it's "To Put Him Out Of His Misery".

atlantel November 25 2006, 17:01:42 UTC

I loved the last line! It's going to be funny. I like seeing Ron tortured being treated so badly in fanfiction world!

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 17:04:46 UTC

Now, you're the third one to want more. How am I supposed to resist the plot bunnies that are taking hold of my brain?

atlantel November 25 2006, 17:07:39 UTC

Oh I thought it was a cliff... oops.

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 17:09:47 UTC

No harm done. I was aiming for an open ending. Too open?

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queenp71 November 25 2006, 17:24:22 UTC

I shall be 4th then to say, What's gonna happen to Ron?

You left us with a nice picture of Hermione and Snape sitting and talking, but you follow it up with, "Mwuahaha, now what I get to do to the Weasley boy." and you expect us to be happy? I think NOT!

Make it into a full-fledged story. It'll be fun...and if you need more suggestions, I've been known to make people write more just by asking questions... Just ask Snapeophile. :)

Mas, por favor...Mas!!

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 17:27:08 UTC

You folks are worse than Death Eaters. Wait, some of you are Death Eater. At least, you've convinced me to think about it ;D

queenp71 November 25 2006, 17:34:49 UTC

I'm not a DE...just a spy. :D

Now, look deeply into my eyes. Listen carefully to what I am about to tell you. Follow my instructions. It is time for you to write more of the story about Crookshanks. Be sure to address how the cat/kneazle gets Ron Weasley out of the picture. Also, include Hermione and Severus discovering they are attracted to each other. Finally, you need to include a happily ever after ending. You can fill in the rest of the details as you wish. Now when I snap my fingers you will do as you have been instructed. Do you understand? By your nod I see that you do. Are you ready? On the count of three. 1....2....3*SNAP*

So, are you going to post more of this story or not?

septentrion1970 November 25 2006, 17:36:52 UTC

ROKL (roll on the keyboard laughing). I might give in if you spy for the DE for four weeks.

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