Comments | grangersnape100: In Their Dungeon

dragoon811 in grangersnape100

In Their Dungeon

Sep 26, 2014 14:39

Title: In Their Dungeon
Team Name: Death Eaters
Word Count: 2x100
Challenge: syllable challenge
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Hermione & Severus
Author's Notes: I'm sorry

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syllable writing challenge, dragoon811

Comments 9

teddyradiator September 26 2014, 23:05:28 UTC

Lovely! I am so impressed at the artistry of haikus, but I'm pants at them. It's lovely to see someone really take the prompt and soar with it! Brava!

dragoon811 September 29 2014, 12:59:28 UTC

Oh!!! Thank you so very very much!! ♥

arwitchywoman September 27 2014, 02:33:38 UTC

Something about the prose made that muy caliente! I love how you made those words just flow to the rhythm.

dragoon811 September 29 2014, 13:00:36 UTC

Thank you!!!! I had way too much fun writing it, I admit ;)

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dragoon811 September 29 2014, 13:00:51 UTC

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked those lines. :)

droxy September 28 2014, 19:21:37 UTC

Lovely and rythmic. LOL. Good take on a tough challenge. Well done!

dragoon811 September 29 2014, 13:01:19 UTC

Thank you kindly, Droxy!! :)

articcat621 September 28 2014, 19:42:49 UTC

Oh my goodness *dies* this is just fantastic! So delicious... wonderful, seductive haiku. Xx

dragoon811 September 29 2014, 13:01:50 UTC

*blushes* Thank you so very much!!!! (And please don't die!!!)