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Purloined Revenge

Jan 29, 2014 18:18

Title: Purloined Revenge

Team Name: Spys

Word Count: 100 x 4

Rating: PG-13

Challenge: Rescue Me Challenge

Characters: (Hermioine/Severus) Harry Potter, and implied Ron Weasley/Lavender Brown.

Warnings: Character Death, implied sexual situation

Authors Notes: My 1st fanfic. Ever. Be Gentle. html I know not. I solicit and accept all suggestions. ( Read more... )

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Comments 26

surfmistress January 30 2014, 00:29:58 UTC

Absolutely wonderful first piece!! Very Snape-like for him to 'know' what happened but decide not trying to prove it but take advatage of it instead.

arwitchywoman January 30 2014, 00:32:27 UTC

My first review! I'm adding you as a friend. Thanks you for your kind words. All along I was thinking "he'll teach her how to kill with no emotion, he'll teach her how to hide her crime, and she will be ready for the Final Battle". He rescues her from despair and returns her to confidence.

madeleone January 30 2014, 00:44:54 UTC

Wow. Very nicely done, the ending was not what I was expecting at all.

All along I was thinking "he'll teach her how to kill with no emotion, he'll teach her how to hide her crime, and she will be ready for the Final Battle". I had to laugh at this statement because I can not tell you how many time I have thought a story was going to go one direction and those damn characters refuse to co-operate and take it somewhere else entirely. They sometimes have a mind of their own. LOL.

Hope to see more of you and feel free to friend if you want, I'll friend back. ;)

arwitchywoman January 30 2014, 00:51:42 UTC

I never intended for the end to be a surprise, I guess it wasn't to me, I was thinking that way all along! I'm actually thrilled it threw you for a loop. Thanks so very much for your awesome review. ***DoingTheHappyDance***

teddyradiator January 30 2014, 01:11:06 UTC

Whoa. That was... intense. Hell hath no fury, indeed!

arwitchywoman January 30 2014, 01:16:03 UTC

Oh My GOD my fanfiction hero read my work! Teddyradiator, you are my inspiration. I'll be writing more soon. :)

teddyradiator January 30 2014, 01:19:09 UTC

Aw, shucks! *blushes*. Thanks! Glad to see you here.

imhilien January 30 2014, 01:27:16 UTC

Nicely written and welcome. :)

Don't mess with Hermione, indeed...

arwitchywoman January 30 2014, 02:03:16 UTC

i am so glad you liked it! Thanks for the welcome! Yeah, Hermione can be a b^&*h if she needs to be.

dreamy_dragon73 January 30 2014, 01:28:48 UTC

Lovely drabbles. I like your characterisation here - at the end there was a chill creeping down my spine. I hope you'll write more!

arwitchywoman January 30 2014, 02:04:10 UTC

I promise! More will be on its way. I think I like this writing thing. Glad you like the story, and I can't say I'm sorry I creeped you out!