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zyra321 in grangersnape100

It's Too Late To Apologize

Jun 23, 2008 22:32

Title: It’s Too Late To Apologize
Team Name: Spy for the Tattoo-ed Men
Word Count: (100 x 4)
Rating: PG
Challenge: blame it on Ron challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus, Ron, pretty bimbo
Authors Notes: Inspired by ( Read more... )

zyra321, blame it on ron challenge

Comments 19

slytherinmuggle June 23 2008, 15:06:10 UTC

Always said Ron is wrong for her, the immature prat.
Thank you for sharing, that was really lovely.

zyra321 June 24 2008, 02:56:22 UTC

Ron is one I always thought would go for looks before anything else (his episode with Lavender in HBP). When he saw how beautiful she is with Severus, then only he realized his loss.

(pfft ... *stick out tongue at Ron*) :P

Thanks for commenting! :)

bambu345 June 23 2008, 16:51:14 UTC

I think Ron's exactly the sort not to recognize the value of what he has until after it's gone.

And how very supportive of Severus, despite Hermione faltering a little.

zyra321 June 24 2008, 03:00:21 UTC

Exactly, I agree. I think his relationship with Hermione was like a given to him. He didn't have to earn her, to woo her, she's already his. So, when that happen, people tend to take it for granted.

Thanks for commenting! I really admired your work, btw! They're all true gems!

bambu345 June 25 2008, 16:56:50 UTC

What a lovely compliment. Thank you so much.

dickgloucester June 23 2008, 18:59:27 UTC

Well-written, faintly tragic. Such a wealth of misunderstanding between HErmione and Ron.

zyra321 June 24 2008, 03:04:54 UTC

He's just wrong for her. I hardly think there's anything in common that they like. Since Hermione was the one who was too eager to be with him at the end of HBP, I made him to leave her instead of the other way around. Notice that he only realized his loss when he saw how beautiful she is. Hmm...

Thank you for commenting! I really appreciate it! :)

lurkerfromoz June 23 2008, 21:52:59 UTC

Hindsight is twenty-twenty, indeed. Great characterisations.

zyra321 June 24 2008, 03:09:11 UTC

Thank you! I hope I didn't make Severus sound too soft. He was reassuring Hermione, after all. *winks*

Thanks again! :)

leonix8238 June 23 2008, 23:50:42 UTC

All us ladies have had that faultering moment at a party when we've discovered someone we hoped would not be there and It would always be lovely to have Severus at your side when it does happen.

zyra321 June 24 2008, 03:10:24 UTC

The keyword is 'Severus'. LOL.

Lucky Hermione to have found him to reassure her when things like this happens.