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Fic: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (3/9)

Apr 17, 2011 10:13

Title: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (3/9)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid eventually
Summary: When it comes to love, neither rhyme nor reason need apply.
Warnings: Based upon this prompt.
Author’s Notes: Written for a prompt by gypsieheart. Hope you enjoy it. And a huge thank you to cherimola for beta work and listening to my whining. ( Read more... )

luke/reid; fic: neither rhyme nor reason

Comments 33

slayerkitty April 17 2011, 12:56:24 UTC

HEEEEEE.

Have I mentioned that I love you? Or that this is amazing? I love the way you write them. :D

gradgirl_07 April 17 2011, 16:06:43 UTC

I love you and think you're amazing. Glad you're enjoying the story and my take on the boys. ~Ali

msv713 April 17 2011, 14:02:42 UTC

Wonderful chapter. It wil be interesting to see how the boys will acknowledge what they feel.

gradgirl_07 April 17 2011, 16:07:13 UTC

Thank you! The boys will take a bit of time but acknowledgment will come and I hope you enjoy it. ~Ali

joann414 April 17 2011, 14:08:46 UTC

Just keeping better and better. I think Luke will over think it and start acknowledging the feelings for Reid, but will be a little hesitant of showing them. Just my opinion. Great chapter

gradgirl_07 April 17 2011, 16:08:10 UTC

Thank you. I think your opinion might be the track of this story... ~Ali

Oh Ali... gypsiesheart April 17 2011, 14:35:28 UTC

OMG! He told Luke he was gay!!! YAY!!! And Luke is starting to recognize his attraction to Reid. Oh..I'm all a flutter with anticipation as too what will happen next!!!!!

Re: Oh Ali... gradgirl_07 April 17 2011, 16:09:00 UTC

Well Reid couldn't keep the fact that he's gay hidden for too long... Glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thank you again for such a lovely prompt. ~Ali

ltklo April 17 2011, 15:28:53 UTC

“I’m gay, Mr. Snyder.”

Finally! That section was frustrating, as I'm sure you meant it to be, with Luke constantly interrupting Reid.

Poor Katie goes from having 2 great guys supposedly interested in her to potentially none :)

I really enjoy your descriptions of their touches and the way they interact.

The younger man’s gaze softened a little and he moved closer to Reid. The pull between them was still there, and Reid’s grip had yet to loosen. “You say that now, but-”

gradgirl_07 April 17 2011, 16:10:00 UTC

Yes, it was meant to be frustrating--actually much of this story was probably meant to be frustrating. ;-) Thank you for such a lovely comment and I'm glad you liked the way I write their interactions and touches. ~Ali