Fic: Don't Let Go (1/7)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Don’t Let Go (1/7)

Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)

Rating: PG-13

Characters/Pairings: (slight) Luke/Noah, Luke/Reid, Ameera, Casey and OC

Summary: AU-When INS Agent Reid Oliver gets called to Oakdale, a simple case turns into the last thing he expects.

Warnings: None

Author’s Notes: Based upon this prompt. Thank you reilaroo for the wonderful prompt

Comments

[playingwithcake]

This is very intriguing! I'm hooked already!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I'm glad you're intrigued. :-) ~Ali

[smoothlikebutta]

What a wonderful, intriguing beginning! I love that Reid can't help but have a reaction to Luke's picture. I can't wait for him to meet Luke in person.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I like that you are intrigued. And Reid said he was attracted to Luke the 2nd or 3rd time he saw him. Figured without blackmail he'd be attracted the 1st time. The first meeting will be in the next chapter. ~Ali

[vernie07]

Yay a new story. And this is way beyond intriguing. Reid has a INS agent/professor to find out what a sham of a marriage that Noah and Ameera have. I hated that story on the show. Just because I felt that Luke had already gone through so much, and then to have his happiness sacrificed again, just didn't sit well with me. And oh Reid. Already curious/attracted to Luke just by looking at his picture? There's Luke's magnetism working again. lol And Sam is right to worry about Reid. His poker face that he has is not going to work on this case. Oh and Reid as an advisor too? I just lol'ed at that. Honest don't hold back anything Reid at your service. :D Great chapter!! Love this already.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. I always enjoy your thorough comments. I hated the story on the show too, but the prompt was an interesting take on it. Yep, Luke is hard to resist. I'm sure Reid will make an interesting prof and advisor... Glad you're enjoying it already. ~Ali

[snowmore]

:D
I was so excited when I saw this prompt fill pop up and I'm not disappointed at all with this first chapter!! :D

Love the scenario that Reid and Luke are in for this particular story and look forward to your updates!! :D

[gradgirl_07]

Robin, thank you. Hopefully I won't disappoint with how Luke and Reid progress... ~Ali

[snowmore]

Ali, I highly doubt you'll disappoint me! :)

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. It's my insecure writergirl coming out. ~Ali

[slayerkitty]

First - I'm so glad that someone is writing this prompt, and I'm even more glad that it's you! :)

Second - I loved all of this. Reid, immediately attracted to Luke even though all he sees is a picture (I can't wait until he sees him in person,lol), and Luke so broken over Noah's wedding...

I can't wait for more. :)

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. I love your writing so a compliment from a writer I admire is very special to me. Without the blackmail, I thought Reid could acknowledge that attraction right off the bat. And poor Luke, hopefully when he meets Reid things will look up for him. ~Ali

[slayerkitty]

Awww, thanks. :)

Yeah, That's how my fic is too. Without Luke being the blackmailer, Reid has no reason not acknowledge that he wants him.

Hee, I hope so too. There are so many places you could take this! ;)