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smoothlikebutta July 24 2010, 06:25:28 UTC
Ahahaha. I loved that Reid insisted on study aids before the dinner. And offering to help Natalie with her project was sweet. :)

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:25:28 UTC
This whole chapter is credit to my beta, reilaroo. She noted wanting to see Reid with the family, so it's all thanks to her. As far as helping Natalie, I love the idea of Reid with kids.

Thank you! ~Ali

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WoW anonymous July 24 2010, 10:52:33 UTC
Holden offered his hand as well, but he took it back when Reid said, “You guys have a kid right? Starts with an A.”

“Reid,” Luke started to reach for the doctor’s hand because he couldn’t put his hand over his mouth.

“Alison?” Reid asked.

“No,” Holden answered. He didn’t appear to want to help by giving any more information.

“I left my note cards in the car. I told you I should bring them with me,” Reid replied looking at Luke. “And why do I know the name Alison?”

“She works at the hospital,” Luke responded. “Alison Stewart. You were at her non-wedding to Casey Hughes.”

“Oh, right.” Reid turned back to the couple. “So what’s your kid’s name again?”

“Abigail,” Molly responded, seeing the slightly dazed look on Holden’s face. “We have a daughter named Abigail, and it’s nice to see you again, Dr. Oliver.”

Love love this part!!! One the best things I have read! I can hear ESS/Reid saying this in my head

Great fic! Can't stop reading . . .

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Re: WoW gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:27:04 UTC
Thank you! My beta, reilaroo, noted she couldn't wait to see Reid with the Snyders and this conversation popped into my head. That was one of my favorite parts to write. Thank you, and I'm glad you could picture ESS/Reid saying this, that's what I was going for.

Glad you liked the story. ~Ali

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happyinchintz72 July 24 2010, 13:58:44 UTC
So wonderful. Reid me all mushy! This is the best Snyder/Reid interaction I've ever read. You are genius!

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:28:32 UTC
Thank you! My beta, reilaroo, said she wanted to see Reid with the Snyders, so I have to give her credit for including this chapter. I was hesitant to write Reid with them (afraid I couldn't do them justice), but I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for all your lovely comments. ~Ali

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aliciamasters July 24 2010, 20:19:46 UTC
Flash cards are lovely! I can picture Luke making them and putting little photos on the back.

I loved both conversations with Molly. And Holden is so insightful; I hope his son catches on soon!

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gradgirl_07 July 25 2010, 14:17:47 UTC
Yes, Luke was a sweet husband by helping Reid "prep." Thanks for your comments. ~Ali

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ltklo July 25 2010, 14:39:22 UTC
Loved the dinner! My fav part was Reid offering to help Natalie with her project, saying they needed to get pizza, and Ethan wanting to join.

So the family thinks that Reid is going to hurt Luke? Completely ignoring that Noah did that.

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gradgirl_07 July 25 2010, 22:20:06 UTC
Thank you. All credit needs to go to my beta, reilaroo, though. I think Luke's family is protective of Luke, not having any idea who Reid is and why he would marry him, so they're closing rank around him.

~Ali

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