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happyinchintz72 July 24 2010, 10:07:22 UTC
God I adored this. It's so wonderfully written!
The Reid interupting Noah was perfect! Haha!
Loved the plane ride- aha Reid cares really :)

Brilliant fabulous amazing :D

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:02:55 UTC
Thank you! Yes, Reid cares, not sure if he'll admit it, though (at least not yet). ~Ali

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apolla_92 July 24 2010, 16:12:46 UTC
omg!you have in a kind of...frenzy to get through this! this is awesome! and hilarious, i laughed out loud so many times that my sister has stopped asking "what?" this is great. i can't wait to read more!

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:03:58 UTC
Wow thank you! Glad you think it's funny. I love writing Luke and Reid's conversations. Hope you're enjoying it. ~Ali

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aliciamasters July 24 2010, 18:43:14 UTC
Oh, Luke taking Oliver as his last name is making me swoon. How wonderful. It's a nice way for his new life to begin.

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gimlicakeshop July 24 2010, 19:01:00 UTC
I like this an altern-beginning of their relationship. It's always satisfying to read Reid express his surprise at the Ameera shenanigans. It almost makes having watch it unfold on screen worth it.

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:06:19 UTC
Thank you. And I have to admit, I'm always curious as to what/how Reid would react to Ameera, etc. So I had to throw that in. ~Ali

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:05:03 UTC
Yes, I loved writing Luke Oliver throughout this story. And I liked what you said about it being a new life. Very true, not just a business arrangement. ~Ali

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shadownyc July 24 2010, 18:59:55 UTC
I can feel Reid & Luke getting closer. Great story.

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gradgirl_07 July 24 2010, 19:06:52 UTC
Thank you! Baby steps, but yes, they are getting closer. ~Ali

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ltklo July 24 2010, 23:06:53 UTC
Oh my, Luke thinking of Reid's friendship with Katie and Jacob when deciding where to live is a nice detail.

One thing that I enjoy about your stories is how you don't rush things but instead take the time to develop relationships and describe details. Like how Noah doesn't know that Reid is gay.

“You would know,” Luke muttered. An Ameera zing, love it!

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gradgirl_07 July 25 2010, 13:51:24 UTC
Thank you! I figured Reid wouldn't want to be too far from Katie (and of course, Luke would know that too). I always wondered how Noah found out Reid was gay and Ameera...well, I won't say anything. ~Ali

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