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gracie_musica

Torchwood -- Hidden Asset

Jul 19, 2008 14:28

Title: Hidden Asset
horizonssing Challenge: Day Twelve
Date Written: 7/16/08
Rating: PG/K+
Word Count: 1,201
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa, OC
Spoilers: Up through Doctor Who 02, major for Cyberwoman
Warnings: Pre-series AU in which there is no Lisa hiding in the basement.
Author Notes: Bribe for cazmalfoy. I'm starting to see a ( Read more... )

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Comments 40

cazmalfoy July 19 2008, 19:41:04 UTC

Oh, what a wonderful bribe.

Fantastic, brilliant, stupendous... I've run out of words.

Do you mind if I friend you?

gracie_musica July 20 2008, 07:10:04 UTC

The bribe was worth the fic I got in return! *laughs* A Jones kid for a Jones kid.

And feel free to friend! ^__^

thrace_adams July 19 2008, 19:51:00 UTC

You get an AWWW icon award :) This was just too adorable for words (and yes the aww icon is now TWO icons so I can spread the love further). Ianto is adorable with little Bethany - and Jack *sigh*

gracie_musica July 20 2008, 07:07:18 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it.

katestamps July 19 2008, 19:55:13 UTC

Oooooh. The idea of Ianto being brisk, efficient and out the door 5 minutes before quittin' time is just perfect. Bethany as a heart-breaker seems very possible, especially since she seems to have captivated Jack. I love Jack moving in and tidying up. So much of fandom sees Jack as incapable of the domestic, so I adore seeing the other side of him (and ouch about his son.)

If Jack's willing to catch hell from Suzie for Ianto after only two weeks, then there's definitely more to the story. And I'd love to see the contrast between Ianto's "other life" and Gwen's. Yeah, you're not done with this one at ALL.

fake_is_love July 20 2008, 06:12:33 UTC

What the nice lady above said.*points*

gracie_musica July 20 2008, 06:51:34 UTC

*laughs* she always knows the perfect thing to say, doesn't she?

gracie_musica July 20 2008, 07:06:27 UTC

*laughs* Jack *did* manage to survive before Ianto, and he was military, which I imagine still teaches cleanliness even in the 51st century. I think Jack doesn't do domestic around Ianto so Ianto sticks around.

Done. Finis. Book closed. Period on the end.

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bookwrm89 July 19 2008, 19:58:26 UTC

Oh, I like that idea! Bethany was so sweet and Ianto so good with her. Loved it!

gracie_musica July 20 2008, 07:01:42 UTC

Bethany's the only thing he's got left, he'd probably cut off his arm to make her happy.

teachwriteslash July 19 2008, 20:10:42 UTC

Ummmm - not a series. Right. And my stories are brief, fluffy one shot, PWPs.

Uh huh.

Pull the other one sweetie.

This is adorable - just adorable.

gracie_musica July 20 2008, 07:00:23 UTC

They're REALLY LONG ONE SHOTS.