Comments | graceful_mind: "anger" {one shot} 01

graceful_mind

"anger" {one shot} 01

Jul 24, 2010 21:03

Beta'd by:bree_nd Title: Anger
Fandom: FT Island.
Length: one shot.
Status: completed.
Pairing: Jongki, ninja SeungHwan, and WonJin
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Comedy, Smut.
Summary: No one of them wanted to move, or do anything but listen to the heartbeat, which sang a very familiar beat, the beat of lovers. *a request from angelgingel123

Anger

( Part 1 )

l: 1000~5000, p: seunghwan, f: f.t island, r: nc-17, p: wonbin/jaejin, p: jonghun/hongki

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graceful_mind July 24 2010, 18:20:00 UTC

Spot for angelgingel123

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graceful_mind August 6 2010, 02:34:21 UTC

:P thanks baby~ Jongki ♥

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graceful_mind July 24 2010, 18:20:54 UTC

Spot for bree_nd

bree_nd August 25 2010, 19:23:05 UTC

Sorry I'm late. Bah, one month and one day later. *shakes head*

Him, the prince of every girl alive, maybe few unlucky guys too.
He is the prince of every girl alive; maybe a few unlucky guys too.

He had the long black hair that made him look so beautiful, the equally black eyes, which shined when he looked at anything.
He had the long black hair that made him look so beautiful and the equally black eyes which shined when he looked at anything.

Hongki never thought he was the kind of people that would be attracted to that façade Jonghun sported.
Hongki never thought that he was the kind of person that would be attracted to that façade Jonghun sported.

He started with a gentle type of skating, moving slowly, no dangerous moves.
He started with a gentle type of skating; moving slowly, no dangerous moves.

Nevertheless, as he wanted to jump and rotate, but a loud honk stopped him instantly, he turned around sharply.
Nevertheless, as he wanted to jump and rotate, a loud honk stopped him instantly and he turned around sharply.

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graceful_mind August 25 2010, 20:24:06 UTC

I edited them, Gosh these mistakes are so small ><;; I'll pay more attention next time :) thanks unni

bree_nd August 25 2010, 19:27:16 UTC

Anyway, I promised edits and fangirling. So this is my fangirling comment.

I don't believe you made Hongki a flirt!!! Okay, I do but Jonghun's reaction is so precious!!!
And despite that Hongki gets kinda pissed that Jonghun called him a flirt, he still ended up kissing the other!!!
Omgomgomg, so adorable!
And poor Hongki, being ever-clumsy. You just had to make him pathetic. XD

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graceful_mind August 6 2010, 02:41:13 UTC

LOL well said...

y__y sisterly lurve, I wish my sister wasn't much of a bish so I can share my yaoi-ness lurve with her.

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