Comments | grabi_hands: Lips and Teeth (Alan/Nick, PG-13)

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Lips and Teeth (Alan/Nick, PG-13)

Jul 12, 2010 18:44

Alan/Nick . 502 words . PG-13 . This is a kiss for the centuries.

( Alan whimpers into Nick's mouth. )

fandom: demon's lexicon, pairing: nick/alan, rating: pg-13, fanfiction

Comments 9

citiesfalling July 12 2010, 22:47:19 UTC

WELL I SURE KNOW WHAT DREAMS I'M GOING TO HAVE WHEN I GO TO BED IN TWO MINUTES.

~*~SEXY DREAMS~*~

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igrab July 12 2010, 22:59:00 UTC

|DDDDD I AM GLAD YOU APPROVE! i have a few others but yeah.

and i love how i've written everything but the pairing i'm supposed to be writing. damn.

storylandqueen July 13 2010, 02:15:01 UTC

This? Is going in my memories.

I'm not going to be example to explain in detail all the things I love about this because it's just the overall effect I love - that the kiss is special, that it's important. It could be life-changing, life-ending, world-destroying, or anything else they want it to be. That kiss is the most important thing and I love that sense of 'this is it'.

But I also like the power flows between them, that they smile and don't need to speak. I like that the kiss is something special, but its setting are so ordinary. It's a Monday and Alan's on the porch, and it feels like just a dull, dreary, draggy day that can't possibly have anything wonderful happen, but it does. I love that.

onceforluck July 17 2010, 15:33:29 UTC

oh holy crap. i died. you made my brain dead.

THIS IS SO GORGEOUS. This pairing does funny things to my heart, and the whole time I was reading this I was like ;aklenf;akenf I LOVE THEM OMG and my heart was somewhere in my throat region.

He means let up, let me do something and his fingers scrape at Nick's collarbone, and though Nick pulls a fraction of an inch away, he can feel the twisted smile on his lips.
And right about here my heart melted and my brain went WANT.

I don't even know, I want to right more about why this was so ~*fabulous~* but I'm just like YES YES YES in my head. Sigh. So much love. <3333333333

igrab July 17 2010, 15:40:02 UTC

IT WAS ALL BECAUSE OF THAT STUPID PICTURE, OMG. I COULD NOT AND STILL CANNOT STOP STARING AT IT. AND IT JUST MADE ME WANT LOTS AND LOTS OF KISSING. This was clearly not nearly enough but. Whatever.

onceforluck July 17 2010, 16:13:03 UTC

THIS IS ME RIGHT NOW, STILL STARING. It's so damn beautiful.

And um, I really really like that icon. I don't know why I didn't snatch it up before, but I think I might have to have it. Like now.

igrab July 17 2010, 16:14:29 UTC

hahaha TAKE AWAY. having a sudden urge to do another icon batch, too. esp since i need to do some icons for percy20in20 anyway. (now to find my mouse...)

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kohl_eyed July 18 2010, 13:29:26 UTC

I THINK--

I THINK I LOVE YOU.

AND NICK AND ALAN.

AND NICK AND ALAN MAKING OUT. oh god, it's kind of wrong, isn't it? *flails* WRONG BUT BEAUTIFUL.