Comments | grabi_hands: 100 Suns (Tony/Jarvis, NC-17)

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100 Suns (Tony/Jarvis, NC-17)

Jul 05, 2010 21:18

Tony/Jarvis . written for: xtinethepirate . 2,868 words . NC-17 . Human!Jarvis, part of a longer story that may or may not ever get written.

( I can't do this. You're all I've got. )

fandom: iron man, rating: nc-17, pairing: tony/jarvis, fanfiction

Comments 14

citiesfalling July 6 2010, 02:54:22 UTC

I like that Jarvis went from being a dood alfred dood to being a robot to being a dood again, only younger, sexier and Paul Bettanier. This handles that transition really well in a sexier, Paul Bettanier way.

That said, OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. HOT. SWEET. ADORABLE. SEXY. OMG. <3 You have rendered me braindead from awesome.

I love this to bits. Jarvis and Tony are so meant to be, and a song came on that was all techno and android-y that lasted the whole fic readthrough, so it was awesome that way, too.

Reply citiesfalling January 15 2011, 03:42:22 UTC

I was actually picturing Spike from Buffy the Vamp Slayer.

gemini_melia July 6 2010, 02:56:12 UTC

yummy and heartaching. Love your Jarvis and the relationship you build between him and Tony - I'd love to see more of this story!

xaefryl July 6 2010, 08:27:33 UTC

Fuck. Yeah, I'm not sleeping any time soon. Not after reading that. Gods, a good Tony/human!Jarvis fic. You have made my night (morning?). I love the banter, I love little bits of snark from both of them and, gods, I love how I could hear their voices perfectly in my mind while reading.

I think I'll just sit here and mutter incoherently for a while.

tesla_titania July 6 2010, 16:04:43 UTC

My day was made! Night. Week. Possibly my life. <3

okami_oujou July 7 2010, 11:56:46 UTC

Oh, wow. Thank you for writing and sharing this fic! It's excellent! &hearts I loved your portrayal of Jarvis. I would love to read more! &hearts

It would be great if you could x-post this little gem to alowprofile!

If you don't ming, I would love to rec this fic at #TonyJarvis. I'm the mod there and the members are craving more T/J fanfics. ;)

igrab July 7 2010, 16:46:02 UTC

:)))) feel free to rec anywhere! and omgsh i will definitely post it there, now that i know it exists.