Comments | grabi_hands: If No One Will Listen (Percy/Nico, PG)

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If No One Will Listen (Percy/Nico, PG)

Jun 19, 2010 01:57

Percy, Sally, pre-Percy/Nico . written for vaultedthewall . 603 words . PG . I'm not worried for him, I'm worried about him.

( Specifically, I'm worried because he doesn't have any other friends. )

fandom: percy jackson and the..., pairing: percy/nico, rating: pg, fanfiction

Comments 6

storylandqueen June 20 2010, 04:33:06 UTC

This is why Sally's awesome. She knows her son, she knows teenagers, and she knows. This really isn't a very helpful comment, but I like how Sally knows everything (Told you so) and how Percy's being a teenager about it (so there). To be quite honest, the last three paragraphs make the fic for me. I love them, especially about the text and knowing who to blame. It's just so normal when so many things aren't for them.

venacavaa June 20 2010, 07:11:03 UTC

I really love you and I really love this. And, turns out, I've got a serious soft spot for Percy/Nico. If I wasn't so happy about the adorableness of this all, I would be wondering when that whole "shipping Percy and Nico" thing even happened.

♥

chizwiffle June 21 2010, 03:50:08 UTC

Short but oh-so-sweet. I really loved Sally in the books and I was always so happy that she was making something of her life throughout the novels, and that she was happy. You could tell that Percy got quite a bit of his awesomeness from Sally, nevermind the fact that his father is a god. And really, no wonder Poseidon chose Sally! She is simply awesome!

Case in point, you've hit her character spot on. I love it. I love the relationship between Sally and Percy that you've painted here. I love how you can see the emotions from Percy, all of them, and I love that Sally brings it up without quite bringing it up. She's his mother, and it shows in the most endearing, perfect way.

I think I'm babbling worse than Percy now. Wonderful work. Can't wait to read more. :)

neorouge June 25 2010, 23:57:23 UTC

He's a little obsessed with you.

But if he breaks your heart, I'm saying 'I told you so'.

Sally just may be the coolest mom ever =D

I really loved this ^^ Percy blushing while talking about Nico was adorable, especially the fact that he was trying to avoid the subject with Sally

aimmyarrowshigh January 16 2011, 08:41:07 UTC

I really love this one. My review will be woefully inadequate, but I'm not really sure how to describe how I feel about Sally's relationship with Percy and her relationship to Percy/Nico here. I think it's baldly honest and that's why it's so hard to review as a fanfic; it feels more "Percy, Sally, and Nico" than anything in canon did. We're hammered over the head in PJO that Percy loves Sally so much, but I never felt it in RR's writing. I feel it here.