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Sweep

May 01, 2007 00:23

Title: Sweep
Author: kerrymdb
Prompts:October and hail
Rating: G
Genre: Romance
Summary: After being caught in a hailstorm, Neville and Luna discover that more than flowers can blossom in a greenhouse...

( Sweep )

author: kerrymdb, april showers challenge

Comments 17

mosaic May 1 2007, 06:45:36 UTC

I feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Thanks for sharing such a cute story!

He briefly looked into her eyes, checking to see if there was any sign of a concussion.
That was soooooo Neville. I always love how you characterize these two; you really have a grasp on the characters. Great job!

kerrymdb May 1 2007, 16:08:03 UTC

I always love how you characterize these two
Thank you so much! That means a lot, especially about Luna, cause she's so hard to write without making her too insane.

This was a lot of fun to write. Thank you for reading! :)

manda_lalala May 1 2007, 15:52:17 UTC

That was an adorable story! I love it! It's funny though because my story they start at the green house and end up in Hagrid's Hut because of a storm... I better get it finished... April is over.

I really thoroughly enjoyed your story!

kerrymdb May 1 2007, 16:17:16 UTC

It's funny though because my story they start at the green house and end up in Hagrid's Hut because of a storm...
Hee! Great minds think a like! :)

I'm so pleased you liked the story. Thank you for reading! :)

slytherin_face May 1 2007, 18:52:37 UTC

Awww, that was just too adorable! I agree with lindy_grl123... your characterization of these two is always spot on... your Luna is just so perfect! Great job!

kerrymdb May 2 2007, 03:53:21 UTC

Thank you! I love writing these two together so much. I'm glad you liked it! :)

molly_coddles May 1 2007, 20:46:51 UTC

That's the best ending ever! ROFL
Unconventional Luna, who loved being swept off her seat!

Really, life is all in how you perceive it. Fantastic lesson for Neville to learn about himself; that just because he doesn't think he's anything outstanding, that might be exactly how someone else sees him.

A good lesson for everyone, I think. :)

Great fic! :D

kerrymdb May 2 2007, 05:18:10 UTC

Hee! Luna would never want anything ordinary. Being knocked off a stool is probably her perfect idea of true love! :)

You are certainly right that we aren't truly what we think we are, but how people perceive us. Neville definitely needs that lesson.

Thank you for reading! :)

cheeky_weasley May 6 2007, 15:08:54 UTC

That was lovely. I adore N/L!

kerrymdb May 7 2007, 20:57:00 UTC

Thank you! Neville/Luna is one of my favorites as well. :)