Hello Lou, I don't know what I preferred:the lust or the laughs... your fic is just amazingly good at both! I could picture them, playing, bickering and may I say eye-f*cking!!! loved it, especially "A moment of shock shines in Sawyer’s eye before it morphs in something more feral. It sends shivers down Jack’s spine, as he understands he’ll get both meds and sexual favors after all." oh yeah Jack is about to be lucky! :D Great job, bisous ♥
Oh, if only it had gone that way in canon! The meds AND a blowjob -- way to negotiate, Jack! The way Sawyer flirted with Jack in that scene, I don't see how Jack could resist, guh. Thanks for taking me back to revisit one of my very favorite slashy canon scenes, and for giving it the perfect twist! ♥
Little darlin', I adore late birthday presents! Does nothing more than extend the day. What wonderful fun this is - I (among others) absolutely loved this scene; you know, the one which made J/S canon. :) I'm thrilled that you used it as the foundation for my present!fic. *g*
So, I'm reading and loving and laughing at your insight into Jack's head when suddenly I get to a line which strikes a very familiar chord ... Jack would be real happy to have some mini-movie of that flirty smile playing over and over again, so he could watch and stare as hard and as long as he wishes.
Hey, are you talking about Jack here or are you talking about ME? Fess up, my love for your icon sparked that line, didn't it? *loves
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Hey, are you talking about Jack here or are you talking about ME? Fess up, my love for your icon sparked that line, didn't it? *loves*
*grins*
yep, that's how the whole fic was born! lol! you know those 100 drabble on a icon? I thought of that and.. it morphed in this!
the first version really stuck to canon (except what was in Jack head). But it called to be slightly revisited! lol! and you are right, Sawyer does win too after all!
I'm so happy you liked this! yay! *dances* my job is done!
I'm sooo looking forward to meet you too! in fact, buying tickets today! woo hoo! Tennessee will never be the same ;)
You know what I like? I like your stories...because they are totally 'canonable' that's not really a word, huh?...anyways I can actually see what you write happening. Of course Sawyer is gonna be the one that bets the sexual favors trying to throw Jack for a loop...too bad that's what Jack had been waiting for. *giggles*
You should totally, make a sequel where Jack goes back for that bj. *hinthint* *nudgenudge* Hey, speaking of you and fics...are you still gonna try to work on the Baseball AU?? I'm thinking that some rookies *coughJARED/JENSENcough* should be coming on board soon, right? ;)
thank you, that's a huge compliment. I must say that not a word of their mouths (ahem, except maybe in the last section) was directly taken from canon, as was body language. but yes, I do think that some sexual innuendo would be a sawyer thing to do to mess with Jack. but our Jackie-boy is naughty, so yeah.... lol!
Hey, speaking of you and fics...are you still gonna try to work on the Baseball AU?? I'm thinking that some rookies *coughJARED/JENSENcough* should be coming on board soon, right? ;)
what are you talking about? *whistle innocently*
are you poking me???
patience is your friend my love. I'll just say that =D
Do you wanna be poked? *wiggles eyebrows* I don't know, poking doesn't actually work for me, I've been poking themoononastick since the luau for Viggo/Josh and it still hasn't happened. *sighs* But I suppose I can poke ya if you want me to. POKE POKE POKE POKITY POKE POKE
patience is your friend my love. I'll just say that =D
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of course you can! lol! it was soooooo obvious!
and Jack is going to get lucky indeed! yay!
thanks, I'm happy you liked it and I always love when someone highlights a sentence! *hug* *bisous*
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thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked this! *smooches*
PS I'm going to buy my tickets in a few minutes, YAY!
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So, I'm reading and loving and laughing at your insight into Jack's head when suddenly I get to a line which strikes a very familiar chord ... Jack would be real happy to have some mini-movie of that flirty smile playing over and over again, so he could watch and stare as hard and as long as he wishes.
Hey, are you talking about Jack here or are you talking about ME? Fess up, my love for your icon sparked that line, didn't it? *loves ( ... )
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*grins*
yep, that's how the whole fic was born! lol! you know those 100 drabble on a icon? I thought of that and.. it morphed in this!
the first version really stuck to canon (except what was in Jack head). But it called to be slightly revisited! lol! and you are right, Sawyer does win too after all!
I'm so happy you liked this! yay! *dances* my job is done!
I'm sooo looking forward to meet you too! in fact, buying tickets today! woo hoo! Tennessee will never be the same ;)
*big giant hugs and kisses*
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You know what I like? I like your stories...because they are totally 'canonable' that's not really a word, huh?...anyways I can actually see what you write happening. Of course Sawyer is gonna be the one that bets the sexual favors trying to throw Jack for a loop...too bad that's what Jack had been waiting for. *giggles*
You should totally, make a sequel where Jack goes back for that bj. *hinthint* *nudgenudge* Hey, speaking of you and fics...are you still gonna try to work on the Baseball AU?? I'm thinking that some rookies *coughJARED/JENSENcough* should be coming on board soon, right? ;)
*loves*
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btw I therefore dub 'canonable' a word *nods*
thank you, that's a huge compliment. I must say that not a word of their mouths (ahem, except maybe in the last section) was directly taken from canon, as was body language. but yes, I do think that some sexual innuendo would be a sawyer thing to do to mess with Jack. but our Jackie-boy is naughty, so yeah.... lol!
Hey, speaking of you and fics...are you still gonna try to work on the Baseball AU?? I'm thinking that some rookies *coughJARED/JENSENcough* should be coming on board soon, right? ;)
what are you talking about? *whistle innocently*
are you poking me???
patience is your friend my love. I'll just say that =D
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Hee! You shall be Louie from now on...*giggles*
btw I therefore dub 'canonable' a word *nods*
Awesome! I created a very good word. ;)
are you poking me???
Do you wanna be poked? *wiggles eyebrows* I don't know, poking doesn't actually work for me, I've been poking themoononastick since the luau for Viggo/Josh and it still hasn't happened. *sighs* But I suppose I can poke ya if you want me to. POKE POKE POKE POKITY POKE POKE
patience is your friend my love. I'll just say that =D
*cocks eyebrow* Oh really? Hmmm....
*smoochies*
-C-
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sounds kind of nice, in fact ;)
LOL!
ahhh, I'm sorry Lynn didn't give you Josh/Viggo. you know I would love that!! *zones*
*cocks eyebrow* Oh really? Hmmm....
*wiggles eyebrows*
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