Unwritten (Assume Nothing)

[gotstoked]

Title: Unwritten (Assume Nothing)
Author: Nat
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,904
Pairing: Gil/Nick
Characters: Gil Grissom, Nick Stokes and occasional cameos by other cast members.
Warnings: Adults only, please.
Spoilers: Assume Nothing
Disclaimer: You know the "I don't own these two" drill, so I won't bore you.
Unbeta-ed: I'm too busy to spell check.  I do my

Comments

[angus_honey]

Oooh...I felt uncomfortable reading this!

I know Nick didn't have to do it and was a v.willing participant, but it seemed a bit tawdry of Gil to want to do it, and then especially in the room where murder had so recently been committed! And on that bed...yuck!

I think Nick was right to feel sick and gag. Gil overstepped the mark.

Let's hope they have a change of clothing back at the lab and don't have to use that ALS light soon!!

[gotstoked]

I know. Yucky on so many levels, right?!

I'm not sure what is the most nerve-wracking. The bed bugs or naughty Gil!!

[cgrgrl]

I want to wrap Nicky up in my arms and hold him tight. Poor Baby!!!

[gotstoked]

I know. What is it about him that makes us want to do that?!

[maxieroc]

Hi

Wow,

That was just wow, Ok I have to say, I do like a Dom/ Gil, and he sure was here,however he used Nick's insecurities here.

I do feel for Nick, though, but he could of got up and walked away

Naughty Gil,make for great reading

Wonderful update

[stokesgirl]

Well, I loved it. Loved Gil's control over Nick and Nick just went along with it.

Yes Gil did take advantage of our Nicky, but then the sex was hot, so you know, it's ok. :D

Typical Gil, thinking about the right thing to do and then doesn't do it.

"He knew Nick well enough to know that he would stop him if he wanted him to stop. Nick had told him that before. "

I'm assuming that'll we know about this in the next chapter? ;)

Great chapter, as usual!