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Unwritten (One To Go)

Oct 21, 2010 00:33

Title: Unwritten
Author: Nat
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,690
Pairing: Gil/Nick
Characters: Gil Grissom, Nick Stokes and occasional cameos by other cast members.
Warnings: Adults only, please.
Spoilers: One To Go
Disclaimer: You know the "I don't own these two" drill, so I won't bore you.
Unbeta-ed: I'm too busy to spell check. I do my best.
A/N 1: A fun ( Read more... )

Comments 13

angus_honey October 21 2010, 11:45:43 UTC

Okay, the fic was brilliant...yada...yada...yada...

But what I want to know, is how the hell did you post o/2600 words in one go??? I cannot do 1500 sometimes!! Did you use Rich Text or HTML...that might have made a difference?

Anyhoo...back to the fic, my fave bit in all of the excellence was: ...he pulled him into a kiss. It wasn’t their first….

It was just the implied background they shared, almost a throwaway line but it says soooo much!

And go and post to CSI Slash! Do as you're told!

gotstoked October 21 2010, 12:49:41 UTC

Ok first off...didn't I post to the right places?! Why are you yelling at me? Is there a CSI Slash on LJ or something else. Message me because I am confused. (It doesn't take much!)

The fic...

So glad you liked it!!! And do you NOT read your Author's notes?! That line was anything but a throwaway!!! These vignettes are going to move backwards in time...so the hint at a prior history is just a suggestion of what is to come. Pardon the pun.

I'm glad you enjoyed!

And about the length...I just copy and pasted from word and I usually don't have any problem. Even with graphics! But I just use plain text so maybe that is helping I am not sure!

angus_honey October 21 2010, 13:14:26 UTC

The right places minus two...so I've already sent you the links! I can yell if I want to...I'm under stress!!

Of course I don't read the blurb...but I have now...so the line was pretty useless then!!! LOL!!

Talking of Memento...have you seen Inception???

cgrgrl October 21 2010, 15:26:46 UTC

Wowsa! That was both hot and sweet. I loved the Gil's take on Catherine.

gotstoked October 21 2010, 17:07:18 UTC

So glad you liked!! Yeah I have a tendency to let Catherine speak for all the fangirls! Someone has to!

Oh and thank you pointing out that I used the picture as the cut. I totally should have said that!!

maldeluxx October 21 2010, 17:49:47 UTC

Hot and heartwarming :D

gotstoked October 21 2010, 20:43:05 UTC

Thank you! It's always nice when those two things find a way to happen at the same time! I'm glad you liked!!

maxieroc October 21 2010, 18:48:30 UTC

HI

Amazing, wonderful start, wow, very hot as well.

Can't wait for more, but of course I am sure you know that already.

Now since this is going backwards, does this mean this is the only sex we get between the 2 of them???. I hope not

gotstoked October 21 2010, 20:45:56 UTC

Thank you as always!!

Leave it to you to ask the burning questions!!

It doesn't explicitly SAY that they haven't before...but it is kinda hinted at isn't it?! I guess (I know, I know...everybody all together now...) you just have to keep reading to find out!!

stokesgirl October 21 2010, 22:04:16 UTC

Wow, that was just great. I love it and the sex wasn't bad either. LOL

Ah who am I kidding, it was great.

Loved this:

"Another hot spurt of Nick’s lust peaked"

Nick's lust - what a great description

I going to be really looking forward to how this plays out.

A great concept. :)

P.S. I will review the other story and Dee (just in case she sees this) I'll be reviewing your story and the streaming story too. :)

gotstoked October 22 2010, 00:14:33 UTC

So so so glad you liked!

Yeah...it is hard to keep coming up with new ways to describe bodily functions! So I am glad you approve!

I think the concept is fun. I'm having fun anyway.

No pressure on your reviews...even though we both totally feed off of them!

Thanks again!