Comment fic meme

Nov 23, 2011 21:02

Some members liked the idea of having a kink meme/comment fic meme on got_exchange, especially since the other ASOIAF/GoT kink memes are fairly dead at the moment. (It's only posted on the mod account journal because I don't want anonymous comments on the exchange comm.)

A couple of rules before we start:

- please include the pairing/character (and maybe a short ( Read more... )

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The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram November 25 2011, 21:26:26 UTC
But he did not come to her as her brother. He has new parentage now. Direwolves and dragons grace his personal sigil. He is still a bastard-just not Eddard Stark’s-although no one thinks to remind the king of that.

She finds his hand with her own, lacing her fingers through his, knitting them together. Though he wears no gloves, his hand is warm. Unnaturally so, given the chill of the air that makes their breath blow white, but she is accustomed to his fevered skin against hers.

“You’re cold,” he says, giving her hand a squeeze.

“As I should be,” she says with a soft smile, as his too large cloak slips once more, baring a pale shoulder to his gaze.

He bends, pressing a hot kiss to her flesh that causes her to shiver the way the wind does not. “It’s too early to stir.” They did so on her whim, and while he is serious and not given to caprice, having learned restraint and sacrifice and self denial at the Wall, he concedes to her wishes now more than ever. “We should go back inside,” he murmurs, his lips brushing her exposed clavicle.

If passion prompted his words, she would surrender to his counsel, but it is concern that casts a shadow over his face as he straightens up, and there is no need for that. It is up to her to assuage his worry. With her free hand she strokes his cheek, stubbled with a day and night’s worth of growth. “I like the cold. We’re both children of the north,” she reminds him, tilting her head up to receive his kiss.

“But in your condition,” he begins, but she cuts him off the way no one else dares do.

“The cold can’t do us any harm. Besides, I intend to make the most of it while it lasts: it won’t be winter much longer.” The days already grow warmer, the nights shorter, as spring slowly creeps forward to consume more and more of the blessed time they spend alone together in the shade of night.

He frowns, drawing her into his chest and wrapping his arms around her thickening waist.

They are the last two standing, but not for long.

-Fin-

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 linndechir November 25 2011, 22:09:51 UTC
This is very beautifully written. I don't even ship them, but I really like the quiet, peaceful tone of this fic, and the hopeful note of the last sentence.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram November 26 2011, 03:24:16 UTC
Why, thank you so much! I don't live and die by the ship either, but it strikes me as something that could happen. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 jal80 November 25 2011, 22:24:57 UTC
This is GORGEOUS. Love, love, love!!

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram November 26 2011, 03:24:46 UTC
Thanks very much. I'm happy to hear you liked it. :)

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 janie_tangerine November 25 2011, 23:34:01 UTC
Aw, this was just lovely. I'm not exactly into the pairing but it's totally intriguing and I really like what you did here. Them ending up with each other makes perfect sense and their dialogue was totally spot-on. I really liked this.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram November 26 2011, 03:26:34 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I could see Sansa end up with a few people, and have thought that this was as likely a pairing as any.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 ex_yaakov825 November 26 2011, 01:01:08 UTC
This is such a beautiful pairing! Kind of like an echo of Ned and Cat. The writing is wonderful, too.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram November 26 2011, 03:27:16 UTC
I hadn't thought of it in those terms, but you're right. It would be reminiscent of Ned and Cat. Thanks very much for reading and your thoughtful comment. :)

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 midnightblack07 November 26 2011, 02:03:53 UTC
GAAH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR FILLING MY PROMPT SO BEAUTIFULLY!! <333

I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS--the melancholy tone, that little bit of hope inspired by their unborn child at the end, the way you cement how mutual their need for each other is--EVERYTHING REALLY *___*

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram November 26 2011, 03:28:45 UTC
You are very, very welcome, my dear. I was thrilled to see the prompt (so, thank you!) and eager to fill it, but that you like it means a great deal. :D They're a lovely pairing, I think.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 perelynn December 1 2011, 02:54:32 UTC
Nice! I usually don't ship Jon/Sansa, but I do enjoy the picture of him, looking so much like Ned Stark, and her, looking so much like Lady Catelyn, and still completely different.

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Re: The Last Two, 2/2 just_a_dram December 1 2011, 03:54:06 UTC
I don't live and die by the ship by any means, but I do like the mirroring. I'm glad it worked for you as well. :D

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