Comment fic meme

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Some members liked the idea of having a kink meme/comment fic meme on got_exchange, especially since the other ASOIAF/GoT kink memes are fairly dead at the moment. (It's only posted on the mod account journal because I don't want anonymous comments on the exchange comm.)

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- please include the pairing/character (and maybe a short

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Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

He pulled away when he sensed that Ramsay was about to come, losing tufts of hair to his lord’s firm grip, and when at last he did, moaning loudly, it splattered on Theon’s chest, soaking the rich fabric. Theon was near tears, but he held back, afraid to show any emotion whatsoever. He dared a look at his lord’s face, which was flushed and contorted, eyes closed, a hideous sight.

Ramsay opened his eyes and grinned, seeing the mess that was Theon Greyjoy, sprawled on the floor.

“Did I - did I - please you?” he asked, tenatively.

Ramsay nodded. “It will do for a start. But you will get better.” Lacing his breeches, he stood and walked toward the door. Before he left, he turned and said insinuatingly, “What a nice, soft mouth you have, Greyjoy. Better used for pleasuring your betters than making snide remarks.” He stalked out of the room them, headed back to the Great Hall.

Theon stared at his doublet, the velvet ruined, stained by mud and Ramsay’s seed. Thrusting it from his body, he balled the offending garment and threw it in a far corner. When he stared at himself in the mirror, attempting to tidy himself after what had just passed, the frightened look on his face, the dullness of his eyes, caused his gorge to rise, and he vomited in the basin. He rinsed his mouth over and over, but it did no good.

Sorry, that sort of got away from me and turned into a fic.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[linndechir]

Why are you apologising for getting carried away? This is awesome. :D I love the mixture of old Theon defiance, but also beginning weariness, the knowledge that he has to watch what he says if he doesn't want to get in trouble. And I really liked your description of Ramsay, repulsive but kind of ridiculous (somehow it works even better since you mentioned that Euron-Ramsay-comparison ;)), volatile, always on the verge of losing his temper, especially without Roose around to keep him in check.

Thank you so much for writing this. :D Ramsay/Reek is such an intriguing pairing, there needs to be more of it. ^^

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

Eh, I shouldn't. It just got so LONG! I'm glad that you liked it. One day I will write more of them.

Ramsay is such a loser, seriously. If he weren't a psychopath and Roose' son, everyone would laugh at him behind his back. I just couldn't resist having the earring make an appearance.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[linndechir]

I don't mind longer fills, I'm greedy. And yay for more!

I think we should start shipping Euron/Ramsay, lol. And I think people DO laugh at him, but they make sure to laugh only behind his back. Oh God, is that earring actually canon? I had completely forgotten about that.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

Yes, it's mentioned in ADWD. He's wearing a velvet outfit in Bolton colors with an earring. I wrote an aborted fic where Roose is like, "Get rid of this!" and yanks it out of his ear while Walda watches, horrified.

Euron/Ramsay. Hmm. So much posturing. They'd sit up drinking and trying to out-badass each other and then make out?

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[linndechir]

I remember the gaudy outfit, but not the earring. What a loser. And I love the idea of Roose yanking out the earring. It's oddly hot.

I don't even know if they'd get around to making out, they'd be way too busy telling each other how badass they are. And exchange torture advice.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

It kind of is hot. I don't know why. Another thing I should finish one day...

Ramsey/Euron is oddly funny. Kind of a bromance.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[linndechir]

It really is hot ... WTF, Roose makes the strangest things hot. Sounds like an awesome little scene.

Victarion and Roose are in the background, facepalming and wondering how to get rid of their crazy poser relatives.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

Roose, why do you have to make the weirdest things seem hot? Ugh. I think I was subconsciously ripping off the Jaime Lannister/hand moment in ASOS or something. I will have to finish it when I'm in one of my crackfic-y moods...

That would be hilarious fanart.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[linndechir]

I don't even think it would take crack!Roose to do that. ;)

Ah, all those moments when I wish I could draw.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

Man, if I could draw, there would be so much creepy and bizarre fanart...

I think that anyone would have that reaction. But only Roose could get away with it without having his fingers flayed.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[embossedsilver]

This was really very good, for a pairing I never thought I would read. Excellent!

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

Thank you!

...I've been wanting to write this for a while. It was kind of inevitable in a way.

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[ex_yaakov825]

NICE!! Ramsay is so awful, and you wrote him perfectly. I love seeing Theon's reaction while he's still Theon, too. I'm very glad this got carried away. xD

Re: Part III: Ramsay/Reek: spoilers past ACOK, warnings for non-con, sexual things, etc.

[sternflammenden]

Thank you! I'm glad that I got Ramsay - he's fun to write because he's so revolting and such a loser and ugh.