Comment fic meme #3

Jul 10, 2012 19:43

Here we go for the post-exchange comment fic meme. (Posted on the mod account as usual because I don't want to enable anonymous comments on the exchange comm.)

A couple of rules:

- please include the pairing/character (and maybe a short prompt/kink) in the comment title - both for prompts and for fills.
- there are both show and book fans in this ( Read more... )

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Butterflies and Hurricanes 1/2 lydzi July 15 2012, 16:24:44 UTC
It's not exactly following your prompt but I had some huge troubles dealing with it for some obscure reasons. Smut, and even more in english, has never been my forte ^^'.

Butterflies and Hurricanes.

She wants to tear her uncle to pieces for being so damn stuuborn.

She kisses him instead.

Victarion doesn't even have the time to prepare himself for the attack. He barely has the presence to aknowledge the fact that it is Asha that is attacking his mouth before pulling out the axe that he was holding lightly. For a second, white is all he sees and feels, nothing but blankness. It hits him full blast what they are doing.

She is family and while he could make her stop just by using one of his large and callous hand, he holds to the idea that she is Balon's precious daughter still.

"Get off Asha." he tells harshly between two hungry kisses.

The young woman stops, pushing her black hair out her pale and milky face. He's still on his bed, half naked and she's still on top of him fully clothed but there's a shift in the air. The temperature doesn't seem to know what to do and the moistness seems momentarily unbearable.

She laughs throatily, murmuring into his cheek. "And what will you do your majesty? spill my blood on the floor? Because only the Drowned God would make me stop now n'uncle. Are you the Drowned God?"

He is horrified by her words, but he can't help also the knife-twist of want that lances him keenly, clawing right into that part of him. She watches the shape his mouth makes as he speaks, lips enunciating carefully. "Only once. Only this time my niece." If she didn't knew any better, she would laugh and jape at him but her uncle -her king- is everything but easy on those things and instead she slowly takes off her clothes before he decides to change his mind.

The naked hunger now in his eyes is almost too much to bear and as he puts his hand on her waist and switches their position, she suppresses a laugh at his impatience. He gets rid of anything that stands between them with an ease she didn't thought he had. She chooses that moment to attack his earlobe with her teeth and he makes a low sound that vibrates right through her. He inhales sharply, hips rocking up, face turned into her, making it easier for her to bask in his scent. "You smell like water and iron and salt, n'uncle" she tells him breathlessly.
He groans. The heat. Victarion could never recall feeling so hot, so very torrid from the inside out. And watching Asha go back and forth, up and down, he wondered to what degree this was working on her too.

"You'll make me your queen n'uncle. Yes?"

She can feel him being close. She knows she is close too now. Their motions have become halting and jerky. One hand slips about his neck, one hand ghosts through his black hair. Like mine, she thinks.

"You're already my hand." He states between small gulps of air. She feels him stiffen suddenly, and she cannot restrain her own gasp as he hauls her clean off his bed, still wrapped around him, still filled by him, and turns to press her back to the wall. "You're too ambitious Asha. Always wanting more."

Well, that is true, she certainly isn't going to deny. But she never wanted those things only for herself but for Pyke and for the men and women she considers like her family.
Her feet now clear off the floor, all she can do is wrap her legs around him and hold on.

"Uncle?" she asks and she doesn't even know if it's her body asking for mercy or if she's still holding on an answer. Both.

"You talk too much woman." He looks at her, wild and suddenly more, blazing like the very heart of a storm in the deeps of the sea.

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Re: Butterflies and Hurricanes 2/2 lydzi July 15 2012, 16:25:03 UTC
It is for Pyke and for the throne but she believes she will like it. To be his queen. Tales will be told about them and...it is hard to think now with his fingers touching her just perfectly. The tremors find her, wracking her body with earth-shaking force. She clenches tight around him, and he drives in, one, two, three, shuddering as he erupts, searing hot, within her.

They both slide on the floor, neither speaking, both trying to slowly catch their brains and breath back. After some time, Victarion sighs then extends his arm to a bottle not too far from them, and swallows half of it in a gulp.

Then, he passes it to Asha before heading back to his bed.

She stares quietly at the gesture, a small smile playing on her lips. Her body is aching, but unlike during a battlefield, it's a good ache, a comfortable ache. The gold liquid burns the back of her throat already raw. Yes, she will like this.

And while she hears a soft snore filling the room, she takes another drink thinking she can give her uncle another hour.

Then she'll have her answer again.

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Re: Butterflies and Hurricanes 2/2 linndechir July 16 2012, 00:27:12 UTC
DFGJGDFBKDF I LOVE YOU. God, this is hot. You should write Greyjoy porn more often. So perfect. Asha just getting what she wants, Victarion hesitating at first, but being a fucking force of nature once he gives in, Asha being greedy and wanting him AGAIN because fanon!Victarion is epic in bed ... I love this so much. <33333 Thank you so much.

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Re: Butterflies and Hurricanes 2/2 lydzi July 16 2012, 22:43:43 UTC
I'm glad you liked it ^^. Everything those two are in is hot by default anyway ;).

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Re: Butterflies and Hurricanes 2/2 unityfic July 17 2012, 18:51:16 UTC
Hnngh, I'm liking this pairing more and more. Asha taking advantage of Victarion's fondness for her is so hot, and I just loved the whole power dynamic in this. "Tales will be told about them", oh yes most definitely. The thought of them ruling together is a very formidable prospect. The Ironborn just don't know what's good for them, I guess.

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Re: Butterflies and Hurricanes 2/2 lydzi July 25 2012, 15:34:10 UTC
It will be their downfall tbh because omg yes Asha and Victarion rulling would make them unstoppable!

Thanks a lot for your comment <333.

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