milk bottles

Mar 20, 2015 14:24

title: milk bottles
pairing: mark/jackson
rating: nc-17
summary: jackson was the only one who saw mary when she was invisible.
warning: !genderswitch

Mary feels like her heart is an ice cream and Jackson's smile is the sun, melting it effortlessly. )

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minchievous March 20 2015, 15:53:34 UTC
I WILL RETURN TO COMMENT PROPERLY WHEN I AM COHERENT

UNFORTUNATELY THAT TIME DOES NOT SEEM CLOSE

TOMORROW EVENING, PERHAPS.

SCREAMS.

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gotchick March 21 2015, 16:40:46 UTC
hahaha aww you don't have to comment further this is good enough! :D what is coherency can you eat it ;)
screams back im so happy you enjoyed this so much you became incoherent ^-^ i wasn't sure whether you read het but i wanted to dedicate you a markson in return for yours ♥
thank you so much for reading again and the sweet comment~ i love rayray :3

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verisatum March 21 2015, 00:32:46 UTC
SCREAMS FOR A MILLION YEARS

I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOU I LOVE LIFE

YOUR CHARACTERIZATION IS SO **YESS**** IM GONNA CRY I LOVE MARKSON SO MUCH

i appreciate this a lot and i need to write but instead i read ;-; OOPS

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gotchick March 21 2015, 16:49:17 UTC
screams for a million eternities ♥

aww im so happy you enjoyed this!!! :D I LOVE YOU TOO :3 im really pleased you liked the characterization bc i felt mark was a bit OOC hahaha. ME TOO im markson af ;~;

cries i appreciate your comment more!! :) thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me such a sweet, lovely comment ^-^ it really made my day. hehe im flattered you spent the time to read this when you should've been writing, and good luck with your writing! :)) i've read a few of your fics before and they're awesome ;)

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verisatum March 21 2015, 19:53:50 UTC
YOU READ MY FICS?????????????????? ok goodbye im dead

THANKY OU LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!

this made me unbelievably happy you have no idea!!!!

I WILL WRITE QUICKLY SO YOU CAN READ SOME MORE FICS HEHE <3333

p.s. if you ever um like have some free time and wanna write w someone i have a post on my personal journal about a collab project im doing????? if you're interested no pressure yknow :-) it would be an honor to do so!!!

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gotchick March 23 2015, 06:59:54 UTC
OF COURSE, AND LOVE THEM!!! :D YOU'RE WELCOME ^^ your comment made me unbelievably happy too. hahaha hwaiting~ ♥

ooh that sounds super cool i'll definitely check it out! its my honour to be invited to collab by you! :)

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woohyun March 21 2015, 01:01:01 UTC
so if Jackson ripped her panties off, did she went home without it lmao

anyways, i like this!!! Jackson is so hot ugh. tho i cant seem to imagine girl!Mark lol

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gotchick March 21 2015, 16:59:00 UTC
LMFAO actually i magically restored the panties, but that works too... :B
huhu im so happy you liked it! ^-^ ikr heterosexual!jackson is so hot sobs. i can't either its all got7's fault for not crossdressing D< mark would be the prettiest girl tho! ;w;
thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me such a lovely, sweet comment! :D

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saranghey_you March 21 2015, 06:53:17 UTC
Oh my god. This was so fluffy and sweet. /holy diabetus ( ... )

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gotchick March 23 2015, 06:40:24 UTC
omg i can't believe you left me such a long and amazing comment again!!! T__T i couldn't stop smiling like a derp when i was reading your lovely comment sobs you are too sweet ( ... )

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saranghey_you March 23 2015, 08:22:48 UTC
I'm always gonna leave a long detailed comment! Expect that 5ever.

But today is not that day as i have just finished my final exams and my carpal tunnel syndrome is at its worst (i fucking hate those fill in the bauble/box type exams, my name is so damn long, everybody else is shading number 16, i'm still doing my first name)

Lol jb/jaekyung/jessa is gonna be the most badass chick ever. Kinda like jLaw or cara delevigne.

Yes my thirst for jb is visible af.
Yes for jinri, i also like jiyoung or jiyun

I actually don't like girl/girl for some reason.

Shit. I just imagined jaekyungxjr smut scene. Fuck fuck fcuk. She's gonna be the biggest tease.
/screaming

/whispers Make it happen.

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saranghey_you March 25 2015, 15:54:41 UTC
On a side note:

"Mary" is such an innocent name. Then again, your characterization of mark is very shy.

I used to a have a genderbender (or beginnings of one) where i renamed mark to mari (mah-ree) and another one where i called her Mac (short for Mckenzie)

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bloodyrose2442 March 21 2015, 12:08:14 UTC
spot!

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bloodyrose2442 March 23 2015, 12:13:24 UTC
first of all- sorry for being so late with this comment >__<

okay, so this was hot as hell- it's been a long while since I've read any genderbend, so I forgot how steamy that could get hehehehe. your mary was the typical hidden gem, just waiting to be discovered, but while in most fics we're talking about cute and pretty and still overall mild girls, i love how you put a sexy spin on her. and jackson as a jock- man he was made for this sort of role. like i wouldn't be suprised if he really was one in high school.

this was a really light and refreshing read, but as always you really manage to raise the bar high just with your great style. thanks for writing this and sharing it with us. as always lots of love and keep on doing what you do lol ♥♥♥

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gotchick March 24 2015, 09:00:30 UTC
awww don't worry bb its not late at all! :D you don't have to apologize like i said you're not even obligated to comment in the first place and no matter when it is, im happy just to receive a comment from you ♥ sorry i didn't reply your spot i wasn't ignoring it but idk what to say when people comment "spot" cuz if i reply "all yours!" then they might feel pressure to comment before they have time but i think its adorable how you always spot on my fics and you know when you comment "spot" my reply is always "all yours hon! :D" hahaha ( ... )

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