oh my gosh hi bb and you really don't have to come back and leave me another comment, like i've mentioned in all my replies to your previous comments, i really appreciated you always taking the time to detail out all your thoughts and feelings about every single plot point to me (esp when it was during your exam period) but it would honestly be more than enough and i would be more than grateful and perfectly content to hear that you read and liked the last chapters as much as all the others!! :') especially since you've left me some of the most amazing and lengthy comments i've ever received on this fic on previous chapters, i'd feel bad to make you waste more of your time commenting on this one ;u; i already feel incredibly, amazingly grateful and flattered that you took the time to read these two chapters when you were outside and enjoyed and were so moved by them than you felt like crying in public T_T and that you went to the trouble of dropping me an anonymous comment right away on your phone even though you weren't logged into lj!! ;A; thats seriously so sweet of you :3 aww you're extremely welcome bb, no need to thank me! :") thank YOU so much for being such an amazing reader, commenter, supporter and friend ;n; this fic wouldn't have turned out half as well as it did without you always by my side being my biggest cheerleader and patiently holding my hand through all the chapters :') its been such a wonderful experience hearing from you and talking to you through your comments which never failed to make me smile and laugh like mad (no pun intended LOL) thank you for everything and all the happiness you've given me in the past month, I LOVE YOU TOO!!! :333 ♥♥♥
ok so hi i keep forgetting to comment cause life :((( this was so sososo wonderful an amazing. all the chapters came together really nicely and im in awe of your writing skills,how you took care of all the small details and made me feel like this fic was real, it felt so realistic. how mark and jackson took care of each other and the how both of them love each other soo much ohmygod i cannot deal w mark why are you so adorable and cute trying to impress jackson at some parts of the fics i got reminded of the quote "You’re in love with him, and he’s in love with you, and it’s like a goddamn tragedy, because you look at him and see the stars, and he looks at you and sees the sun. And you both think the other is just looking at the ground." like i got reminded of the line so much omg i really liked the way you wrote the sex scenes sometime i skip them cause like the build up is not there and sometimes i feel too innocent (such a lie tbh) but urs was perfect ohgod all the build up and both of them being soo goddamn careful abt each other i felt it man and obv once u do it u cant stop and damn mark made mooncakes for jacks like damnn that so cute (T^T) he would do it and "you gave me a galaxy when i only needed a star." damn son i honestly teared up a little and jacks taking pics of rabbit shaped clouds (cuteee) they would move in like this man slowly everything of jacks would just transfer to mark's place and mark's place becoming like no a home for jacks thats so heartwarming (im running out of adjectives here its too perfect) and the grp chat w jaebum and mark coming in through his phone OT7 together again!! and youngjae,yugyeom and bambam learning korean awww they're soso cute and jaebum being all happy talking to them i got all tinglely inside (hes such a dork tbh a giant dork istg but with the shoulders have u seen them in if you do damnn son) "no matter how far apart we are, we're still under the same sky. and as long as we're under this sky, we'll definitely have a chance to meet again in future." i loved this line like i really needed this line right now thank you!! and the last part abt separation and how its inevitable and staying tgt is just a dream right in the heart man i could feel the bond all of them have and i liked the ot7 part so much
(and puns r life tbh i make terrible puns and obv i needed to leave a comment like pls ofc i will its just im v lazy so it takes time to type lolll) and mark making all those terrible jokes/pick-up lines i would totally use them whoops last chapter omg went back to the beach memories and all of them looking fine as hell during graduation and jaebum looking like a hot piece of ass after coming all w piercings and all (i really like his piercings) and hes telling stories abt his childhood and how he found out he wanted to study astronomy lanterns!!! i find that v romantic (*ﾟ▽ﾟ*) and marks princely profile ayyyy (my boi looking like a prince damn right) the whole part abt jacks thinking back to his high school days and realsing all that happened falling for mark,making such good friends and so on felt v insightful to his thoughts somehow idk <33 and watching sunrise tgt ＼(≧▽≦)／ and mark waking jacks up their domestic life is showing walking barefoot along the beach holding hands such perfect picture you created omg and lying on the sand(ok the first thought was like do they have a blanket??? its so troublesome to get the sand out of everywhere ughh i hate sand sry) and jacks being himself w mark and the wholeee part abt why jacks loves mark i cannot describe what i felt omg jacks has a memory box how cute is that w all the little things man omg (such a nerd ohmygod) "but maybe some things are precious because they're not forever," mark counters, voice soft as felt as he squeezes jackson's hand. "because we know how easily they could be lost, how fragile they are, we treasure them all the more." wowwwww i loved this line(basically i loved like every single line) and "when he opens them, he sees those very same stars reflected in mark's eyes like a compass that will always guide him home, twinkling like tea lights." damn such a perfect way to end ＼(￣▽￣)／ (and mark called jacks 'jacks' T^T) reading the whole fic was such a wonderful journey and i wish i can unread it so i get to enjoy it all over again this is def my fav markson fic.you managed to make me feel all sorts of emotions throughout the fic like there are only a handful of fic that managed to do that (i have a cold heart ) i felt v connected to jacks and mark and the fic was so realistic like this can happen to any one of us maybe thats why it touched me so much but anyways this fic is always going to have a special place in my heart andand you're such a wonderful person too i look forward to your replies (ur so adrobsヽ(♡‿♡)ノ) and ur replies are always so long like im crying thank you so much for taking so much time to reply my ramblings and you kept extending the fic (god bless you) to feed out thirsty asses i look forward to more fic from u if possible (idc if its not my fandom i'll still read just for ur writing tbh) thank you once again for being such an amazing writer and an awesome person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( ´∀｀)ノ～ ♡♡♡♡♡ (i think the fic changed me tbh lolll) (and if you do was soooooo good like damn son all of them looked fine af and the dance is harder as well and my bb are working so hard i'm so proud of them and they won the show!!!!!! i felt so much pride when i heard that damn all their voices are like magic cheer me up and the whole album itself is a gift tbh(i even bought it and now i have 10 cents left oops) markson wrote some of the raps too my bbs are doing so well (even tho they did write raps for some songs before too but like !!!!) i want them to win some more(个_个))
oh my god i couldnt believe it when i received these 2 comments yesterday im so incredibly touched that you came back and not only commented again, in detail and at more length, you actually left me two massive comments which are completely concrit and all heartfelt thoughts and sentiments gosh im just blown away the response i've received for this fic has been so amazingly warm and overwhelming it brings me to tears T_T and i don't think it would be an understatement to say that YOU have been the greatest and most amazing supporter and fan of this fic and gosh to have someone as obviously brilliant, eloquent, witty, hilarious and warm-hearted as yourself as this fic's biggest lover is such a fantastic honour to me ;A; i tell everyone that they don't have to take the extra time to comment because im already more than grateful for all the hours they've spent painstakingly reading and following this fic to the end and i mean it but obviously its the most incredible pleasure and joy to receive comments that detail their reaction and feelings about this fic so thoughtfully and lovingly that i feel they could match the amount of effort i put into writing this whole fic ;u; when i realize that every word i've written has been read so meticulously and with such care, all the weeks and months i spent writing this fic honestly feels worth it :') and please don't worry about being late like i said in my earlier reply i didn't expect you to comment on this chapter at all i was already overjoyed and content to know you had enjoyed it as i already felt bad for making you spend your precious time leaving me such amazing and lengthy comments on previous chapters ;; you spoil me too much istg sobs. and ofc i totally understand that rl is definitely more important and i hope you managed to settle all your rl stuff before taking the time to leave these two mindblowing comments!! :))
omg im seriously so happy you enjoyed the last two chapters and the ending as well (although which chapter didn't you enjoy honestly you are too, too sweet i've wanted to tell you for a long time how grateful i am that you were so supportive and always 100% behind me and completely on board no matter which direction i decided to take with this fic, your faith and confidence in me that i could handle the plot well was the most moving thing ever to me ;u;) cries in happiness that you felt all the chapters fell together well bc as i was writing and posting at the same time a lot of things were rushed, last minute and haphazard but im relieved that you felt everything managed to work out well in the end :) sobs thats such a fantastic compliment omg quite a few people have complimented my attention to detail and im immensely flattered bc its not something i deliberately pay attention to so its interesting and a huge honour to me that readers feel its one of my strengths :) im sure you can imagine that "real" and "realistic" are the most profound of praise to any fic!! im really pleased that you felt i could bring the characters to life and you could imagine their actions and reactions as real life people. omg yess markson taking care of each other gives me the most feels i think even irl they look out for each other a lot and have each other's backs thats why they're my favourite brotp ;; their friendship is so beautiful, one of the most beautiful relationships i've ever seen between two people. and sobs im so emotional and grateful that i managed to convey the passion and intensity i wanted to write in markson's dynamic here i really just wanted to write a fic in which they're desperately and deeply in love with each other :') and im so pleased that you found mark cute and adorable while he was trying to impress jackson i felt i kinda wrote him with a little too much insecurity here as opposed to jackson who seemed relatively free of insecurities lmfao but i cant help it i just love the thought of mark trying to impress and please jackson and get his attention ;u; OH MY GOSHH THAT LINE IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!! and so deep and profound and true i totally agree that its perfect for this fic T.T thank you for sharing! im immensely flattered that this fic could remind you of such a beautiful line :')
and yes its tragic when the people we love can't see how amazing they are and how much we love them but sadly it happens pretty often :( and obviously the stars and the sun parts fit the astronomy aspect so well too wahh this quote is flawless ;~; oh gosh im ridiculously flattered that you read the smut scenes for me even though you usually skip them, AND found them well done and well built up!! :') this genre is honestly not one of my fortes and this is the first time i've been able to write it with more detail too, in previous fics mine was usually pretty rushed and flat and generally.... gross hahaha orz. lmao too innocent wow you must be younger than i think you are then! :P (which is a compliment cuz i felt you sounded really mature :3) sobs im just glad i didn't scar you then and yess i think being careful at those times is a touching expression of love and tenderness for the other party ;u; lmfao @ "i felt it man" iM REALLY GLAD LOL its so cute and hilarious how you keep using the word man i love your style of talking ;; i choked at "obv once u do it u cant stop" HAHAHA SO TRUE ooh sounds like you speak from experience lmFAO IM SORRY IM JUST TEASING U XD
huhu ty for noticing the mooncakes part and im pleased you felt its something he would do! :3 cries a little too im so glad that quote affected you so much emotionally that you teared up, and that you noticed the part about rabbit shaped clouds too!! the way you read carefully enough to notice throwaway sentences or details that i merely gloss over in one line and could easily be missed out if someone reads too fast is so moving to me ;A; ahaha thank you for always saying that every plot point is something you feel they would do :'3 and i totally agree, like markson themselves have said that they share all their clothes and belongings irl and i feel that as roommates their lives would just overlap in that natural way :p lmao same im running out of adjectives as well when i reply comments i always use "im so pleased/glad/happy" a million times bc i dont have any other way to express my feelings lmfao but perfect and heartwarming are such priceless compliments to me ;u; yess ot7 i can't get enough of ot7 scenes as well as jaebum scenes i missed him in the last two chaps :( hehe ofc i felt i had to make up for making yugjae chinese by emphasizing their korean names somewhere in the fic :P aww im so pleased it gave you tingly feelings!!! im whEEZING AT "a giant dork istg but with the shoulders" omg you're too humorous and i completely agree lmfao his shoulders are outstanding in this comeback like whoa he needs to chill out :Q__ sobs it makes me so happy to hear that you really needed that line and i could ask for nothing more if it could help you or motivate you in any way!! :)) don't worry, if you have a person you're missing, its only a matter of time before you're reunited with them again :3 as long as you're patient, im sure your wait will be rewarded /hugs. thank you for quoting it and im very pleased it resonated with you :) cries im thrilled you liked how chapter 7 ended bc it was pretty much just cut off at the word limit and not deliberately written as a closing line there hehe and im elated you could feel the ot7 bond bc while writing this verse friendship was equally important to me as relationships so im glad you felt i managed to develop the various as well as group friendship well too! and yup im glad you didn't find that statement too angsty haha i honestly think that its a very sad but realistic truth that separation is an inevitable part of life :') thank you so much for commenting on both chapters in 2 separate comments its always so much fun to rehash the chapter with you again after you've read it and your adorable stream of consciousness comments always make me see it in a new and refreshing way n_n i can't express how grateful i am that you always take so much time and effort to painstakingly type out your emotions and reactions about every single plot point, its so fascinating and rewarding to me to read them and im sure it must be exhausting for you to type out such humongous and exquisitely-crafted comments ;A;
i can tell how much energy and time you put in bc even just typing a reply to just your first comment has already exhausted me lmao i don't think i have time to reply your second one today but i will asap!! thank you for your patience in waiting for me :') before i temporarily end this comment i just wanted you to know what an unbelievable honour it is to me to have a reader and commenter who feels as passionately about this verse and loves this fic and the characters as much as me :") i never expected to have any reader as devoted and immersed in this fic as you and its such a humbling experience for me to have someone who probably knows the fic as well as me ;u; i will definitely thank you as well later but i feel like i should say it a few more times as even a million reiterations would not be enough for me to describe how much it means to me that you have dedicated so many precious hours of your life reading and commenting on this fic and talking to me so excitedly about every single part of it :)))
edit: HAHAHA after i tried to post it tells me my comment of 9420 characters exceeds the maximum character length of 4300 i can't believe i replied your one comment with three oTL i guess i should try to type to at least 12k to make full use of comment space or this reply might actually end up as 6 parts no joke lmFAO /t r a s h
omg puns are life hahaha im glad you think so!!! and lMAO IM CRACKING UP i'd love to see you using this pickup line to hit on somebody :P im sure the results will be spectacular ;) and sobs ME TOO im so lazy but you've probably realized already lol i really want to reply all my commenters lengthily and in detail but i just have very little time and am so tired which is why im so grateful for their neverending patience ;o;
LOLOL FINE AS HELL and hot piece of ass im howling at your terminology too accurate tbh xD i couldnt resist jaebum looks so fine with all his piercings this comeback what a BAMF ;A; and yup i was already nursing the idea of them returning to the beach for their second graduation trip when my friend seconded it so that was settled! :3 huhu im v pleased you noticed and liked the part about his childhood stories and SAME lanterns esp sky lanterns are such a romantic couple activity imo ;; your emotes are too cute!!! LMAO at "ayyy my boi looking like a prince" YOU'RE TOO PRECIOUS AND ADORABLE and ofc how could any markson fic be complete without mark being described as a prince at least once :P hes just such a prince charming /swoons awww im glad you felt that part was insightful!! :)) i was weak and got sentimental reminiscing about past chapters ahhaha /loser :P CRIES YES i felt like i was in a challenge with myself about how cheesy i could make this fic lmfao drips tears at markson watching the sunrise together and LOL domestic SO TRUE OMG YES I love ppl being barefoot like its such a couply thing to do to go barefoot with ur lover lol im happy you could imagine the scene!! :) and LMFAO at your first thought you actually have a really great point but i didnt realize how uncomfortable they would be lying on the sand without a blanket rofl i guess if they were carrying a blanket while walking it would seem way less romantic HAHAHA shh lets just suspend our disbelief but lol you're so cute hating sand and i agree its annoying when it gets in ur clothes lmao HAHAHA SUCH A NERD omg thank you for noticing the memory box part i think you were the only commenter who remarked on it lool and THANK YOU FOR QUOTING AND LOVING THAT LINE i was proud of it ;;A;;; AS WELL AS THE ENDING LINE!!! i had a pretty hard time trying to compose a non-awkward sentence that ended with tea lights bc i really wanted to end with the title rofl. and yess "jacks" is one of my favourite nicknames for jackson so i had to have mark call him that once ;u; omfg "wish i can unread it" is honestly the most epic compliment i could ever receive since i think most people would find it a trial to finish reading such a long chaptered fic even once and would be relieved when they finally finished but in contrast you wish you could spend all those hours again rereading it im soo flattered T-T CRYING ITS BEEN A WONDERFUL JOURNEY FOR ME TOO with you and all my other amazing gorgeous readers im so emo :'((
i honestly hadn't expected such an overwhelming and positive response and such heartwarming support when i first started writing this fic so im still kind of stunned and very, very grateful /on my knees OHMYGOD YOUR FAVE MARKSON FIC SCREAMS INCOHERENTLY thats such a brilliant compliment!!! T_T im immensely flattered and honoured obviously since there are so many other better and more well-written markson fics than this one but the fact that this one is special to you and rings a chord with you just makes me bawl ;a; LOL at "i have a cold heart" you'RE TOO CUTE. in that case im doubly pleased that this fic could touch you so deeply and make you feel emotions gosh im speechless how to english tbh TT omfg im over the moon that you could feel a connection with the characters and felt that this was a realistic scenario that could happen to anybody thats seriously THE greatest praise of all time bc realism is one of the most difficult things to achieve in fics to all writers ;n; weeps uglily this fic is very very honoured to have a special place in ur beautiful heart or even any place at all and you as well as all your comments definitely also have a very important place in mine!!! :") omfg IM A MESS OF TEARS THANK YOU FOR COMPLIMENTING MY PERSONALITY TOO imma combust from ur niceness im really just a fail and a mess tbh i try to reply all my commenters with replies that do justice to their comments and let them know how much i appreciate their love and support but generally just end up rambling obnoxiously xD;; im blushing that you look forward to my lame replies that im embarrassed to make you spend even more time reading :(( aww bb theres no need to thank me at all tbqh how could i even dream of replying your massive comments you took so much energy to type out with just a "thank you" what kind of person would that make me lmao. but you probably felt obligated to extend your comments bc i always rambled in my replies thats why your comments got progressively longer and longer from ur first one you really didnt have to you're such a sweetheart i feel bad hahaha AWW THANK YOU FOR THE BLESSINGS god bless you too!! :')) and lolol nah i wish i could claim the extensions were for my readers but ngl they were more bc my planning was terrible and i didnt manage to finish the chapters in my planned initial number otl omg thank you for liking this enough to look forward and be interested in reading my future fic that means so much that you would even read other fandoms for me kfksjfkdjf ;u; noOOOoo thank YOU so much for being such an amazing reader and awesome person as well!!! T_T im sobbing hysterically at "changed me" im absurdly flattered if this fic could have such a drastic and positive impact on you!!! ;~; lmfao i absolutely love how you always say damn son its the cutest thing ever and MFTE if you do is one of their favourite comebacks for me and im so proud about #GOT71STWIN finally :'))) THEY LOOK AND SOUND SO GOOD JFC and yes the whole album is gold tbh jamming to all the tracks SLAYED AS ALWAYS my kings never disappoint u_u LMFAO 10 CENTS IM CRYING OMG ur such a great fan and yes my heart hurts that they're working so hard i hope they get some rest too! ;o; ikr markson have really come so far in terms of composing their raps so proud of my otp as well :") lol that final emote is so cute and YES ME TOO i hope they win on all the big music shows tbh ;;; pls give my babies the wins they deserve :((( whispers if you have twitter and want me to follow you feel free to pm me your username i'd love to fangirl more with you ;)
wow i originally only planned to reply your first comment bc no time but ended up replying both of them anyway HAHAHA its always such a pleasure and i have so much fun replying your comments its like talking to you face to face :3 thank you so, so much again for all the many hours you've painstakingly devoted to reading this verse with so much tender loving care, supporting this au as well as me so staunchly and unconditionally from the beginning to the end, and all the additional time and effort you took to leave me so many amazing, lengthy and marvellous comments TT im sure you already know how much it means to me ♥ sorry for spilling my feels all over this embarrassing reply but i love you
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this was so sososo wonderful an amazing. all the chapters came together really nicely and im in awe of your writing skills,how you took care of all the small details and made me feel like this fic was real, it felt so realistic. how mark and jackson took care of each other and the how both of them love each other soo much ohmygod i cannot deal w mark why are you so adorable and cute trying to impress jackson at some parts of the fics i got reminded of the quote "You’re in love with him, and he’s in love with you, and it’s like a goddamn tragedy, because you look at him and see the stars, and he looks at you and sees the sun. And you both think the other is just looking at the ground." like i got reminded of the line so much omg i really liked the way you wrote the sex scenes sometime i skip them cause like the build up is not there and sometimes i feel too innocent (such a lie tbh) but urs was perfect ohgod all the build up and both of them being soo goddamn careful abt each other i felt it man and obv once u do it u cant stop
and damn mark made mooncakes for jacks like damnn that so cute (T^T) he would do it and "you gave me a galaxy when i only needed a star." damn son i honestly teared up a little and jacks taking pics of rabbit shaped clouds (cuteee)
they would move in like this man slowly everything of jacks would just transfer to mark's place and mark's place becoming like no a home for jacks thats so heartwarming (im running out of adjectives here its too perfect)
and the grp chat w jaebum and mark coming in through his phone OT7 together again!! and youngjae,yugyeom and bambam learning korean awww they're soso cute and jaebum being all happy talking to them i got all tinglely inside (hes such a dork tbh a giant dork istg but with the shoulders have u seen them in if you do damnn son)
"no matter how far apart we are, we're still under the same sky. and as long as we're under this sky, we'll definitely have a chance to meet again in future." i loved this line like i really needed this line right now thank you!!
and the last part abt separation and how its inevitable and staying tgt is just a dream right in the heart man i could feel the bond all of them have and i liked the ot7 part so much
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last chapter omg went back to the beach memories and all of them looking fine as hell during graduation and jaebum looking like a hot piece of ass after coming all w piercings and all (i really like his piercings) and hes telling stories abt his childhood and how he found out he wanted to study astronomy
lanterns!!! i find that v romantic (*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)
and marks princely profile ayyyy (my boi looking like a prince damn right)
the whole part abt jacks thinking back to his high school days and realsing all that happened falling for mark,making such good friends and so on felt v insightful to his thoughts somehow idk <33
and watching sunrise tgt ＼(≧▽≦)／ and mark waking jacks up their domestic life is showing
walking barefoot along the beach holding hands such perfect picture you created omg and lying on the sand(ok the first thought was like do they have a blanket??? its so troublesome to get the sand out of everywhere ughh i hate sand sry) and jacks being himself w mark and the wholeee part abt why jacks loves mark i cannot describe what i felt omg
jacks has a memory box how cute is that w all the little things man omg (such a nerd ohmygod) "but maybe some things are precious because they're not forever," mark counters, voice soft as felt as he squeezes jackson's hand. "because we know how easily they could be lost, how fragile they are, we treasure them all the more." wowwwww i loved this line(basically i loved like every single line) and "when he opens them, he sees those very same stars reflected in mark's eyes like a compass that will always guide him home, twinkling like tea lights." damn such a perfect way to end ＼(￣▽￣)／ (and mark called jacks 'jacks' T^T)
reading the whole fic was such a wonderful journey and i wish i can unread it so i get to enjoy it all over again this is def my fav markson fic.you managed to make me feel all sorts of emotions throughout the fic like there are only a handful of fic that managed to do that (i have a cold heart ) i felt v connected to jacks and mark and the fic was so realistic like this can happen to any one of us maybe thats why it touched me so much but anyways this fic is always going to have a special place in my heart
andand you're such a wonderful person too i look forward to your replies (ur so adrobsヽ(♡‿♡)ノ) and ur replies are always so long like im crying thank you so much for taking so much time to reply my ramblings and you kept extending the fic (god bless you) to feed out thirsty asses
i look forward to more fic from u if possible (idc if its not my fandom i'll still read just for ur writing tbh)
thank you once again for being such an amazing writer and an awesome person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( ´∀｀)ノ～ ♡♡♡♡♡
(i think the fic changed me tbh lolll)
(and if you do was soooooo good like damn son all of them looked fine af and the dance is harder as well and my bb are working so hard i'm so proud of them and they won the show!!!!!! i felt so much pride when i heard that damn all their voices are like magic cheer me up and the whole album itself is a gift tbh(i even bought it and now i have 10 cents left oops) markson wrote some of the raps too my bbs are doing so well (even tho they did write raps for some songs before too but like !!!!) i want them to win some more(个_个))
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omg im seriously so happy you enjoyed the last two chapters and the ending as well (although which chapter didn't you enjoy honestly you are too, too sweet i've wanted to tell you for a long time how grateful i am that you were so supportive and always 100% behind me and completely on board no matter which direction i decided to take with this fic, your faith and confidence in me that i could handle the plot well was the most moving thing ever to me ;u;) cries in happiness that you felt all the chapters fell together well bc as i was writing and posting at the same time a lot of things were rushed, last minute and haphazard but im relieved that you felt everything managed to work out well in the end :) sobs thats such a fantastic compliment omg quite a few people have complimented my attention to detail and im immensely flattered bc its not something i deliberately pay attention to so its interesting and a huge honour to me that readers feel its one of my strengths :) im sure you can imagine that "real" and "realistic" are the most profound of praise to any fic!! im really pleased that you felt i could bring the characters to life and you could imagine their actions and reactions as real life people. omg yess markson taking care of each other gives me the most feels i think even irl they look out for each other a lot and have each other's backs thats why they're my favourite brotp ;; their friendship is so beautiful, one of the most beautiful relationships i've ever seen between two people. and sobs im so emotional and grateful that i managed to convey the passion and intensity i wanted to write in markson's dynamic here i really just wanted to write a fic in which they're desperately and deeply in love with each other :') and im so pleased that you found mark cute and adorable while he was trying to impress jackson i felt i kinda wrote him with a little too much insecurity here as opposed to jackson who seemed relatively free of insecurities lmfao but i cant help it i just love the thought of mark trying to impress and please jackson and get his attention ;u; OH MY GOSHH THAT LINE IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!! and so deep and profound and true i totally agree that its perfect for this fic T.T thank you for sharing! im immensely flattered that this fic could remind you of such a beautiful line :')
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huhu ty for noticing the mooncakes part and im pleased you felt its something he would do! :3 cries a little too im so glad that quote affected you so much emotionally that you teared up, and that you noticed the part about rabbit shaped clouds too!! the way you read carefully enough to notice throwaway sentences or details that i merely gloss over in one line and could easily be missed out if someone reads too fast is so moving to me ;A; ahaha thank you for always saying that every plot point is something you feel they would do :'3 and i totally agree, like markson themselves have said that they share all their clothes and belongings irl and i feel that as roommates their lives would just overlap in that natural way :p lmao same im running out of adjectives as well when i reply comments i always use "im so pleased/glad/happy" a million times bc i dont have any other way to express my feelings lmfao but perfect and heartwarming are such priceless compliments to me ;u; yess ot7 i can't get enough of ot7 scenes as well as jaebum scenes i missed him in the last two chaps :( hehe ofc i felt i had to make up for making yugjae chinese by emphasizing their korean names somewhere in the fic :P aww im so pleased it gave you tingly feelings!!! im whEEZING AT "a giant dork istg but with the shoulders" omg you're too humorous and i completely agree lmfao his shoulders are outstanding in this comeback like whoa he needs to chill out :Q__ sobs it makes me so happy to hear that you really needed that line and i could ask for nothing more if it could help you or motivate you in any way!! :)) don't worry, if you have a person you're missing, its only a matter of time before you're reunited with them again :3 as long as you're patient, im sure your wait will be rewarded /hugs. thank you for quoting it and im very pleased it resonated with you :)
cries im thrilled you liked how chapter 7 ended bc it was pretty much just cut off at the word limit and not deliberately written as a closing line there hehe and im elated you could feel the ot7 bond bc while writing this verse friendship was equally important to me as relationships so im glad you felt i managed to develop the various as well as group friendship well too! and yup im glad you didn't find that statement too angsty haha i honestly think that its a very sad but realistic truth that separation is an inevitable part of life :') thank you so much for commenting on both chapters in 2 separate comments its always so much fun to rehash the chapter with you again after you've read it and your adorable stream of consciousness comments always make me see it in a new and refreshing way n_n i can't express how grateful i am that you always take so much time and effort to painstakingly type out your emotions and reactions about every single plot point, its so fascinating and rewarding to me to read them and im sure it must be exhausting for you to type out such humongous and exquisitely-crafted comments ;A;
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edit: HAHAHA after i tried to post it tells me my comment of 9420 characters exceeds the maximum character length of 4300 i can't believe i replied your one comment with three oTL i guess i should try to type to at least 12k to make full use of comment space or this reply might actually end up as 6 parts no joke lmFAO /t r a s h
omg puns are life hahaha im glad you think so!!! and lMAO IM CRACKING UP i'd love to see you using this pickup line to hit on somebody :P im sure the results will be spectacular ;) and sobs ME TOO im so lazy but you've probably realized already lol i really want to reply all my commenters lengthily and in detail but i just have very little time and am so tired which is why im so grateful for their neverending patience ;o;
LOLOL FINE AS HELL and hot piece of ass im howling at your terminology too accurate tbh xD i couldnt resist jaebum looks so fine with all his piercings this comeback what a BAMF ;A; and yup i was already nursing the idea of them returning to the beach for their second graduation trip when my friend seconded it so that was settled! :3 huhu im v pleased you noticed and liked the part about his childhood stories and SAME lanterns esp sky lanterns are such a romantic couple activity imo ;; your emotes are too cute!!! LMAO at "ayyy my boi looking like a prince" YOU'RE TOO PRECIOUS AND ADORABLE and ofc how could any markson fic be complete without mark being described as a prince at least once :P hes just such a prince charming /swoons
awww im glad you felt that part was insightful!! :)) i was weak and got sentimental reminiscing about past chapters ahhaha /loser :P CRIES YES i felt like i was in a challenge with myself about how cheesy i could make this fic lmfao drips tears at markson watching the sunrise together and LOL domestic SO TRUE
OMG YES I love ppl being barefoot like its such a couply thing to do to go barefoot with ur lover lol im happy you could imagine the scene!! :) and LMFAO at your first thought you actually have a really great point but i didnt realize how uncomfortable they would be lying on the sand without a blanket rofl i guess if they were carrying a blanket while walking it would seem way less romantic HAHAHA shh lets just suspend our disbelief but lol you're so cute hating sand and i agree its annoying when it gets in ur clothes lmao
HAHAHA SUCH A NERD omg thank you for noticing the memory box part i think you were the only commenter who remarked on it lool and THANK YOU FOR QUOTING AND LOVING THAT LINE i was proud of it ;;A;;; AS WELL AS THE ENDING LINE!!! i had a pretty hard time trying to compose a non-awkward sentence that ended with tea lights bc i really wanted to end with the title rofl. and yess "jacks" is one of my favourite nicknames for jackson so i had to have mark call him that once ;u;
omfg "wish i can unread it" is honestly the most epic compliment i could ever receive since i think most people would find it a trial to finish reading such a long chaptered fic even once and would be relieved when they finally finished but in contrast you wish you could spend all those hours again rereading it im soo flattered T-T CRYING ITS BEEN A WONDERFUL JOURNEY FOR ME TOO with you and all my other amazing gorgeous readers im so emo :'((
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OHMYGOD YOUR FAVE MARKSON FIC SCREAMS INCOHERENTLY thats such a brilliant compliment!!! T_T im immensely flattered and honoured obviously since there are so many other better and more well-written markson fics than this one but the fact that this one is special to you and rings a chord with you just makes me bawl ;a; LOL at "i have a cold heart" you'RE TOO CUTE. in that case im doubly pleased that this fic could touch you so deeply and make you feel emotions gosh im speechless how to english tbh TT omfg im over the moon that you could feel a connection with the characters and felt that this was a realistic scenario that could happen to anybody thats seriously THE greatest praise of all time bc realism is one of the most difficult things to achieve in fics to all writers ;n; weeps uglily this fic is very very honoured to have a special place in ur beautiful heart or even any place at all and you as well as all your comments definitely also have a very important place in mine!!! :") omfg IM A MESS OF TEARS THANK YOU FOR COMPLIMENTING MY PERSONALITY TOO imma combust from ur niceness im really just a fail and a mess tbh i try to reply all my commenters with replies that do justice to their comments and let them know how much i appreciate their love and support but generally just end up rambling obnoxiously xD;; im blushing that you look forward to my lame replies that im embarrassed to make you spend even more time reading :(( aww bb theres no need to thank me at all tbqh how could i even dream of replying your massive comments you took so much energy to type out with just a "thank you" what kind of person would that make me lmao. but you probably felt obligated to extend your comments bc i always rambled in my replies thats why your comments got progressively longer and longer from ur first one you really didnt have to you're such a sweetheart i feel bad hahaha
AWW THANK YOU FOR THE BLESSINGS god bless you too!! :')) and lolol nah i wish i could claim the extensions were for my readers but ngl they were more bc my planning was terrible and i didnt manage to finish the chapters in my planned initial number otl
omg thank you for liking this enough to look forward and be interested in reading my future fic that means so much that you would even read other fandoms for me kfksjfkdjf ;u;
noOOOoo thank YOU so much for being such an amazing reader and awesome person as well!!! T_T im sobbing hysterically at "changed me" im absurdly flattered if this fic could have such a drastic and positive impact on you!!! ;~;
lmfao i absolutely love how you always say damn son its the cutest thing ever and MFTE if you do is one of their favourite comebacks for me and im so proud about #GOT71STWIN finally :'))) THEY LOOK AND SOUND SO GOOD JFC and yes the whole album is gold tbh jamming to all the tracks SLAYED AS ALWAYS my kings never disappoint u_u LMFAO 10 CENTS IM CRYING OMG ur such a great fan and yes my heart hurts that they're working so hard i hope they get some rest too! ;o; ikr markson have really come so far in terms of composing their raps so proud of my otp as well :") lol that final emote is so cute and YES ME TOO i hope they win on all the big music shows tbh ;;; pls give my babies the wins they deserve :((( whispers if you have twitter and want me to follow you feel free to pm me your username i'd love to fangirl more with you ;)
wow i originally only planned to reply your first comment bc no time but ended up replying both of them anyway HAHAHA its always such a pleasure and i have so much fun replying your comments its like talking to you face to face :3 thank you so, so much again for all the many hours you've painstakingly devoted to reading this verse with so much tender loving care, supporting this au as well as me so staunchly and unconditionally from the beginning to the end, and all the additional time and effort you took to leave me so many amazing, lengthy and marvellous comments TT im sure you already know how much it means to me ♥ sorry for spilling my feels all over this embarrassing reply but i love you
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