omg! there's so much that happened that I don't know where to start omg.
So cute of mark to surprise jackson at school, and I loved the part where they kissed in the same spot by the lockers of their first kiss. nice attention to detail!! and I really like the instances where they're still kind of awkward with each other or maybe not sure what the other is thinking or feeling. it feels very "first love" haha.
I can understand jackson's anger/frustrations with finding out that Mark had been smoking (I think I'd react the same way!) and poor mark thinking he'd be dumped because of it but I liked that jackson was really understanding and still loves him regardless.
jackson smiles tremulously, raising a trembling hand to mark's face to tuck his hair behind his ear. "i would be willing to spend the rest of my life trying." THIS WAS MY FAVORITE LINE ITS SO CUTE AND SWEET ;-;
and I really like that they have both said "I love you" when they've been given gifts? not in a shallow way, but because the gifts are obviously really meaningful to them and their relationship. And obviously in that moment when mark is telling him about the book and he sees that mark is still wearing the earrings he bought for him, he realizes wow I really love this person WAH SO INCREDIBLY SWEET.
and then mark turning on loveholic TO SET THE MOOD hehehee ahh. a nice ending. I can't wait for the rest!!
omg thank you so much for still commenting on every chapter, and at such length, even though we're already friends and you could just tell me your thoughts on twitter! :') even if you just let me know you'd read it i'd be more than grateful thats what i just tell all my friends to do hehe :3 you're too sweet to make this comment longer than your usual ones, and of course equally thoughtful! ;~;
ahaha yup i couldn't bear mark and jaebum not appearing in the school scenes after just 2 years that would be too sad :'( so mark returning to mentor the club was an idea i planned early on hehe its too bad jaebum isn't supposed to be in the country so i couldn't include him but dw he'll appear more in the next part :P aww im glad you liked the second locker kiss in this fic! :D and omg "nice attention to detail" is such a huge compliment sobs im glad you felt it had continuity from previous chapters ;u; oh goshhh my thoughts exactly i will never stop saying it but i love markson awkward UST more than anything even irl theres this shy, playful and flirty air between them that makes me feel so fluttery and makes them my otp TT /thinking of the amerithaikong pic mark posted on his ig today cries. YES i love writing about first loves!puppy crush!markson being clumsy and inexperienced dkfjgkdj
haha im really pleased you found jackson's reactions and feelings sympathetic and relatable at the smoking part! :) also glad people didn't think mark picking it up was OOC haha bc i felt it was a kinda unexpected plot twist :P and yeah i think it's normal for most people if they find out their loved ones are smoking without telling them they'd naturally feel shocked and betrayed ;; aww im glad you felt jackson was an understanding boyfriend and accepted and forgave him haha
OMG im super happy thats your favourite line?? T_T the glow in the dark stars scene was also one of the pivotal and emotional scenes that i could see from before i wrote this chapter so im thrilled when people tell me it successfully moved them :) gosh i just love making markson spout corny and cheesy lines to each other with a straight face i can imagine them doing that way too well lmao
huhu im elated you liked when they chose to say i love you i have to thank one of my readers for brilliantly suggesting that jackson should say it back on his birthday as well and i thought that would be a cute parallel hehe. and im really pleased you felt it was in a deep and not shallow way and that the timing as well as the gifts were meaningful! :) i spent time thinking about what presents would relate subtly to astronomy as well as their likes (i cried tears of happiness when i heard that jackson gave mark a necklace for his bday irl too markson giving each other jewellery makes me ;A;) OMG i totally agree and that line is my fave in your comment T.T i think realizations of love tend to hit at the most unexpected moments and sometimes its just something as simple as seeing the person you love wearing something you gave them that are the most devastating :') wahh im delighted you thought it was sweet!!! :3
LOL mark is the biggest cheeseball istg why do i make him do such cringeworthy stuff xD omg you know loveholic too you're awesomee ;o; i love their music and felt this particular song really fit markson's relationship here! :) ahaha im glad you thought so and didn't find it too abrupt bc i actually had no choice but to cut it off there bc of the wordcount :P omg thank you so much for looking forward to the last chapter as usual you've been holding my hand so sweetly and patiently and been one of my biggest cheerleaders from the start and this fic is so much better because of your input ;~; it means more than i can say that not only did i have the honour of receiving so many of your amazing, wonderful and heartwarming comments, i also managed to make a new friend in you :") thank you so much for taking the time to read this chapter again so quickly after it was posted, and the additional effort of painstakingly typing me such a beautiful, heartfelt and constructive comment ♥ ilu
So cute of mark to surprise jackson at school, and I loved the part where they kissed in the same spot by the lockers of their first kiss. nice attention to detail!! and I really like the instances where they're still kind of awkward with each other or maybe not sure what the other is thinking or feeling. it feels very "first love" haha.
I can understand jackson's anger/frustrations with finding out that Mark had been smoking (I think I'd react the same way!) and poor mark thinking he'd be dumped because of it but I liked that jackson was really understanding and still loves him regardless.
jackson smiles tremulously, raising a trembling hand to mark's face to tuck his hair behind his ear. "i would be willing to spend the rest of my life trying." THIS WAS MY FAVORITE LINE ITS SO CUTE AND SWEET ;-;
and I really like that they have both said "I love you" when they've been given gifts? not in a shallow way, but because the gifts are obviously really meaningful to them and their relationship. And obviously in that moment when mark is telling him about the book and he sees that mark is still wearing the earrings he bought for him, he realizes wow I really love this person WAH SO INCREDIBLY SWEET.
and then mark turning on loveholic TO SET THE MOOD hehehee ahh. a nice ending. I can't wait for the rest!!
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ahaha yup i couldn't bear mark and jaebum not appearing in the school scenes after just 2 years that would be too sad :'( so mark returning to mentor the club was an idea i planned early on hehe its too bad jaebum isn't supposed to be in the country so i couldn't include him but dw he'll appear more in the next part :P aww im glad you liked the second locker kiss in this fic! :D and omg "nice attention to detail" is such a huge compliment sobs im glad you felt it had continuity from previous chapters ;u; oh goshhh my thoughts exactly i will never stop saying it but i love markson awkward UST more than anything even irl theres this shy, playful and flirty air between them that makes me feel so fluttery and makes them my otp TT /thinking of the amerithaikong pic mark posted on his ig today cries. YES i love writing about first loves!puppy crush!markson being clumsy and inexperienced dkfjgkdj
haha im really pleased you found jackson's reactions and feelings sympathetic and relatable at the smoking part! :) also glad people didn't think mark picking it up was OOC haha bc i felt it was a kinda unexpected plot twist :P and yeah i think it's normal for most people if they find out their loved ones are smoking without telling them they'd naturally feel shocked and betrayed ;; aww im glad you felt jackson was an understanding boyfriend and accepted and forgave him haha
OMG im super happy thats your favourite line?? T_T the glow in the dark stars scene was also one of the pivotal and emotional scenes that i could see from before i wrote this chapter so im thrilled when people tell me it successfully moved them :) gosh i just love making markson spout corny and cheesy lines to each other with a straight face i can imagine them doing that way too well lmao
huhu im elated you liked when they chose to say i love you i have to thank one of my readers for brilliantly suggesting that jackson should say it back on his birthday as well and i thought that would be a cute parallel hehe. and im really pleased you felt it was in a deep and not shallow way and that the timing as well as the gifts were meaningful! :) i spent time thinking about what presents would relate subtly to astronomy as well as their likes (i cried tears of happiness when i heard that jackson gave mark a necklace for his bday irl too markson giving each other jewellery makes me ;A;) OMG i totally agree and that line is my fave in your comment T.T i think realizations of love tend to hit at the most unexpected moments and sometimes its just something as simple as seeing the person you love wearing something you gave them that are the most devastating :') wahh im delighted you thought it was sweet!!! :3
LOL mark is the biggest cheeseball istg why do i make him do such cringeworthy stuff xD omg you know loveholic too you're awesomee ;o; i love their music and felt this particular song really fit markson's relationship here! :) ahaha im glad you thought so and didn't find it too abrupt bc i actually had no choice but to cut it off there bc of the wordcount :P omg thank you so much for looking forward to the last chapter as usual you've been holding my hand so sweetly and patiently and been one of my biggest cheerleaders from the start and this fic is so much better because of your input ;~; it means more than i can say that not only did i have the honour of receiving so many of your amazing, wonderful and heartwarming comments, i also managed to make a new friend in you :") thank you so much for taking the time to read this chapter again so quickly after it was posted, and the additional effort of painstakingly typing me such a beautiful, heartfelt and constructive comment ♥ ilu
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