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wizardowl306 September 23 2015, 05:44:26 UTC
omggg hiii
u extended it omg i don't know what to feel. i'm listening to one love and its so nice omg im so overwhelmed with feels i cannot
thank you for writing such a long response to my comment it means so much to me T_T and ur so sweet (cries)
this chapter was a rollercoaster cause like dork mark started smoking?????? i totally felt jackson mark was so scared jacks was gonna break up with him and im like mark pls he wouldn't he would just make you stop smoking and how mark was so hesitant the night after and jackson was soso worried for him and then the part abt jacks feeling like a kid compared to mark asgdgh
the ot7-jb moment where they went to get coco that one pic mark has with coco came to my mind it was so cute i cannot deal with mark being so gentle and caring towards everyone even a snail omg (my friend once cried cause she stepped on a snail omg i died)
and jackson and jinyoung painting marks ceiling with stars omg thats so cute like they would ofc do this that is such a them thing to do
and mark being all badass and shit when he went uni like mark pls and the stars thing when mark's dad said "one day, yi-en, someone is going to love you so much they would pluck the moon from the sky for you." and then jackson being like i would omg he said i love you without saying i love u and the other time he said i love u without actually saying it was so sweet but the talk about the moon and stars really got me idk why but i really loved that whole paragraph ohhh and the part abt jacks taking mark's ipod so he'll feel closer idk i really liked that part like that is such a jackson thing to do irl he would do this kind of thing
i remembered mark dying his hair cause of that one comment by jackson i find that so cute and mark being like no ur not allowed to dye ur hair cause ppl pay u enough attention ughhhhh markkkkk&you why do u do this to me?????
ohoh mark came back to the club that was so cuteee and everyone being so damn happy to see him and him trying to fill up jb's space oh my god
and jackson thinking about if mark would have gone with jb or not i'm just like oh my god you have made this fic v realistic in terms of sch and how different ppl take different choices and jacks being a nagging housewife asking mark to eat healthy i feel like doing that to mark now boy pls eat well pls
and finally the birthday the big day mark was so affected by jacks and both of them are hyperaware of each other and damn son and finally jacks said i love you (yassssss) you tell him and mark saved that one song for the special night oh my god can he get any sweeter and he gave him little prince (soo cuteee my bb) i love it when mark starts rambling abt things he loves god bless he's so cute omg i cannot deal w him rn esp after the new teaser omg so rude??? all 7 of them so fucking rude with their angsty ways and being badass and being all violent oh my god i cannot wait for next tue sorry that got off track)
anyways i haven't got around reading ur other fic on ao3 chimera (the stars are not in position for me to read it yet loolll) but soon next week after exams yes!
i really liked this chapter just like all other chapter and pls rest as well writing is hard( i wouldn't know but it seems v hard)
take care of yourself!!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
(i wanted to put in everything i felt but it'll get super long like like 1 page so no)

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gotchick September 26 2015, 22:40:37 UTC
HI i can't believe you left me such a long comment detailing your feelings on every single plot point oh my god T__T im so speechless like i think this is the best tribute anyone could give to the fic... telling me their exact feelings and reaction to every part of the chapter so that i knew how meticulously and carefully they read and thought about the fic and how emotionally impacted they were by every single word ;A; idk how to express how touching your love and dedication to this fic is to me -- no matter what time of the day i post it, within a couple of hours i always receive your very lengthy and thoughtful comment on it T.T hehe yes im horribly long-winded and couldn't keep it within 6 chapters ;; im glad you don't mind the extension tho! :D thank you for your patience in reading this superlong fic :') omg you're too sweet to go and check out and listen to one love! im so pleased you like it too and it gave you feels :3 its always been one of my favourite songs and for awhile this verse has been reminding me of it so i thought it would be appropriate to be markson's couple song here haha. omg ur so welcome i should be the one thanking you for leaving me such an intricate and painstakingly detailed comment on my past chapter too! ;u; of course i have to reply every plot point you took the time to comment on ;)
LOL dork mark started smoking xD aww im really happy you found this chapter emotional and a rollercoaster! :) aww im glad you could sympathize with jackson's feelings and lol you're so cute talking to mark :P yess i like to write about them being upset and bothered by each others actions bc i think it shows how much they mean to each other ;; and YES omg one of the things i love most about markson is their age gap (no matter how small it is) and i love writing their hyung-dongsaeng relationship and slight difference in maturity :") i think jackson respects mark a lot as an older brother and maybe also sometimes sees him as unattainably mature :p
HAHAHA ot7-jb omg thats such a clever phrase i took awhile to get what you meant lol and I THINK I KNOW WHAT PIC YOU MEAN the one where mark has wavy hair and he's holding coco right sobs i love that pic too ;o; LMFAO I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE PART YOU SAID MARK WAS BEING GENTLE AND CARING TO A SNAIL me and the friend who were joking about it were kidding around and i said "im gonna change the summary of the fic to 'in his first year of HS, jackson joins the snail club and meets a snail-obsessed creep called mark'" and she was like GOODBYE LOL omg your friend cried over stepping on a snail i hope it didnt die tho! D: she sounds like she has a very kind heart ;; i guess a snail is a living thing after all and most ppl don't feel good killing living things no matter how small they are even ants :x
CRIES thank you for noticing that part and thinking it was such a them thing to do :"3 and i totally agree it was a scene i thought of from way before this part bc i could totally picture jinson doing that in this au ahha.
LMAO "badass and shit when he went uni like mark pls" im crYING YOU'RE HILARIOUS XD gosh i love mark acting out and i think like any other boy he would have that side that likes to act cool and suave no matter how much of a nerd he is lmfao. OH MY GOD i didnt even realize jackson said i love you without actually saying it at that part!! T_T wow im impressed by how observant and perceptive you are MY EYES ARE OPENED o3o sobs THANK YOU im ridiculously pleased that part got to you bc it was one of the key scenes/emotional and poignant parts in this chapter so im glad it managed to move you :') omg im flailing that you thought that was such a jackson thing to do even irl and i completely agree! ;u; jackson would be so clingy and cuddling mark's possessions and wearing his clothes when he missed him i can imagine this too vividly
HAHAHA istg we must be twins bc we find all the same parts cute and im so happy you liked the part on the 2nd day they met when mark dyed his hair bc of jackson bc thats something that would make me squeal too (if i wasn't the one writing about it lmao) and omG YES u noticed and liked that little bit of possessiveness there im so :'))) lmao mark&you i r sorry im just trying to write mark like my ideal bf tbqh!! :P

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gotchick September 26 2015, 22:41:30 UTC
ksdfkfjkj im glad you liked the part about mark coming back to the club yeah this was sth i planned from early on as well for their third year bc it would be sad if mark and jaebum just left so i planned for them to make as many reappearances as they could :(
oh gosshh thats such a wonderful compliment to me that you feel i've managed to make this fic realistic in terms of how after high school ppl sometimes have to face difficult choices and go their separate ways! ;; its sad but i guess nothing lasts forever :c HAHAHA omg nagging housewife!jackson is the cutest jackson tho /sobs on your shoulder/ wahh you're too qt i ship you with mark :3 me too hes so skinny i wanna feed him and fatten him up huhu
lmao the big day omg YEAH i love writing markson sexual tension and both of them being hyperaware of each other and desperately in love ksjdfksfjksdjf /giving myself feels/ LOL DAMN SON XD the way you speak is too adorable gahh and yes FINALLY he said it back!! AHAHA im glad you liked mark saving a song for the special night i thought that was a bit corny lmfao "soo cuteee my bb" yOU'RE CUTER ;A; the little prince is such a beautiful book! *u* lol god bless cries im so happy you love his dorky rambles lol omg IKR hes so cute both in this verse and even cuter irl TT LMAO "so rude" accurate tbh i've been making agonized walrus noises non stop since hyungline's teasers started coming out and don't think i will stop till the 29th GOSH YES they all look flawless and sf hot with this manly concept and im planning to post the last chap to celebrate the comeback! :D lol nono its okay don't apologize i love fangirling about this and you're so qt when you fangirl haha
omg i can't believe you're planning to read chimera too!! ;A; sobs im super flattered that you liked this enough to be interested in checking out my other markson fics. its not one of my best markson fics imo but i hope you enjoy it if you read it! :3 ahhaha the stars are not in position xD oh my goshh i can't believe you've been spending your precious studying time to leave me such massive and incredible comments even tho your exams are coming up! T.T you really shouldn't have bothered, studies are more important :')) good luck and all the best with your exams bb, im sure you'll do amazing as you sound like an incredibly intelligent and smart person!! :))
it means everything in the world to me that you liked this chapter as much as all the others as i really respect and value your opinion :") now that you've left me a longer comment i feel like i know you better and its also doubly obvious to me what an eloquent, brilliant and discerning reader you are so i feel even more honoured that you praise this fic so highly!!! sobs thank you for being so considerate and thinking of me ofc i will rest well, and you too remember to get sufficient rest~!! :3 ahaha yup writing definitely isn't easy, especially such a long chaptered fic, but all the time and effort i put in are worth it when i get comments like yours and readers like you who read and adore every word of the fic so lovingly ;~; omggg you're such a sweetheart im actually crying irl i really appreciate your concern for me not only as a writer but also as a person, take care of yourself too darling!!! ANOTHER long row of hearts ♥♥♥♥♥
HAHAHA 1 PAGE im very flattered that you had more thoughts and feelings since this comment is extremely long already and you practically typed a play by play commentary on the whole chapter! ;; its far more than enough, and way more than i deserve :') your comments are so entertaining and witty, thoughtful and thought-provoking and i laughed and giggled breathlessly the first time i received this comment and read it and all the subsequent times i reread it too!!! not gonna thank you the same way i do on every chapter bc you've already heard it countless times i feel it might be losing its sincerity so i'll just say thank you for everything :))) i love you (also your mark pouting icon is adorable sobs)

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