untitled (how does it feel) [for EVERYONE]

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For: EVERYONE ♡

Title: untitled (how does it feel)
Pairing(s)/focus: JB/Jr.
Rating: R
Word count: ~9,100
Warnings: Genderswitch, het, swearing, light alcohol impairment but no dubious consent
Author's notes: Hey there [recipient], I took your “That’s what friendship is” prompt five steps too far but I hope you enjoy! Also huge shoutout to my beta

Comments

[preorder]

wait wait THIS PERFECT TITLE jb would be so proud :'0 I was so excited to see this fic and it did not disappoint at all omfg *__* I fucking LOVE genderswitch and you've hit on exactly why I love it here - dumb boys getting thrown by this person who's the same but also not the same, and then the ~emotional truth that can be unearthed from how they all deal with the situation. your humor is spot-on in this from the get-go: Jackson’s scandalized pose: a bastardized Birth of Venus, and in place of his arms and hair, a personalized J.WANG towel. fucking dead, MACHINE GUN RAPPING FROM MARK LMAOOO, "It’s because you’re ugly!" fucking dead x2, the entire section where they realize girl!jr is still grimy as fuck sjdkghsj the collective wilted boner (except jb, I really liked that bit where he talks about dirty girl jinyoung being his ideal, it's a nice (if sad) moment :(( I want to fall in love with my best friend too!!), Hyung, you're bad luck lol @ volatile jr + mte bambam, THE OPPPA-YA oh my god i blushed 😳😳😳

ahh and then the emotional pitch of your story is perfect, you have gems like this hidden amongst all the great humor: To be considerate without even knowing why, that’s the Jinyoung he knew, the Jinyoung that may or may not have been the unintentional subject of Jaebum’s secret codependence. that really gets at Why I Love JJ Project >__< and the turn it takes in the second-ish half when jr jokingly asks if jb's into him, then immediately backpedals (like... an asshole...) when jb owns up to it (plus this hilarious line: “I just thought you would say no! Look at you,” and Jinyoung’s patting him on the back proudly. “So straightforward with girls.”) is such good characterization omg *__* perfect everyone, also the drinking scene sdakldghjs oh my god the KIDS. YUGY CALLING JR NOONA...!!!!! 😳😳😳 also their kinda messy sex is soo perfect, jr "only knowing it from the guy's perspective" 😳😳😳 again. then jr turning back and you truly get jb so well - the confusion, the conflicting feelings, the ~betrayal - man, fuck, I feel betrayed too!!!!! all the kids dealing with the divorce sjkdhgjs and locking ppl in a closet until they resolve their differences is 🙌 but then their kinda sad mature convo :( damn this fic is It. it has it all, my fave trope, sneaky feelings, JJ PROJECT!! thanks so much for writing ^^