[Prince of Tennis] In Need (Inui/Kaidoh, PG-13)

Jun 08, 2010 11:07

Title: In Need
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 940
Summary: Inui/Kaidoh, post-manga. Inui struggles with the changes.

Disclaimer: PoT isn't mine.
A/N: Belated happy birthday to Seigaku’s brain, Inui Sadaharu! I haven’t written Inui/Kaidoh for a while, so this might turn out rusty. But I did put effort into it. Enjoy.

The middle school was familiar, and yet there was a certain strangeness to it. )

#fandom:prince of tennis, chara:momoshiro, #ship:inui/kaidoh, chara:kaidoh, chara:inui

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venivincere June 8 2010, 03:25:31 UTC
Oh, how heartbreaking for Inui! And how hard for Kaidoh, too. I think your last sentence really sums the whole situation up perfectly, and it's a poignant truth. Nicely done!

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dhorz June 8 2010, 03:31:38 UTC
Thank you! I had struggled with that last paragraph, because I had no idea how to sum up the story. I'm happy it turned out well.

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glowstarducky June 8 2010, 13:27:25 UTC
awwwwwww!

You've got to figure that at least one of the seniors would have a little trouble moving on... I think Inui will be ok though ^_~

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dhorz June 9 2010, 04:53:07 UTC
Thanks!
I dunno why I picked Inui for the role. But I guess it turned out OK...

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marourin June 8 2010, 14:13:38 UTC
<3 the end was cute. It was nice to see a little InuKai love--it's been too long really >:

I like how the fic focuses on the transitions in all the characters and find it interesting how Inui feels fixed until the very end.

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dhorz June 9 2010, 04:54:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the fic. :)

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ms_worplesdon June 8 2010, 16:16:47 UTC
Wah, this was lovely! Poor Inui, unsure of what to do with himself, forcing Kaidoh to passively take the lead. ♥

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dhorz June 9 2010, 04:54:45 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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minidrag33 June 9 2010, 04:36:57 UTC
Very nice! :) Cute

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dhorz June 9 2010, 04:55:35 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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