Comments | goren_n_eames: He told me once you could've gone either way.

alibi_factory in goren_n_eames

He told me once you could've gone either way.

Jan 29, 2009 18:32

"Movement"
A story about death, faith, and science, and making sense of it all. Set in and around season seven.
Gen, Goren&Eames with a side of Ross, rated M-ish

( The living are careful and oftentimes caring. The dead are careless, or maybe it's care-less. Either way, they don't care. These are unremarkable and verifiable truths. )

Comments 19

basric January 30 2009, 00:54:48 UTC

I was mesmerized. What a marvelous writer you are. You emotionally dragged your readers through Bobby's life the last few years then left us with...HOPE. I thank you.

alibi_factory January 30 2009, 00:58:33 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! (I still can't tell whether there's too much disjointed emo and not enough substance. Who knows, who knows.)

partri65 January 30 2009, 02:22:13 UTC

This is spectacular - clean, spare and emotive.

And - "a brain the size of Texas" - echoes of Marvin!

alibi_factory February 1 2009, 17:34:51 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! And as I said in a comment further down, I can't claim credit for that line, I stole it from an article on Stephen Fry.

muse0fire January 30 2009, 06:26:00 UTC

As another reviewer posted, this was mesmerizing. Truly. The whole flow works in a non-linear way.

alibi_factory February 1 2009, 19:22:23 UTC

I aim to please. *bows*

tate31nym January 30 2009, 08:21:15 UTC

Wowza.

alibi_factory February 1 2009, 17:34:06 UTC

...Thankza!

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alibi_factory February 1 2009, 17:33:54 UTC

I should probably admit that I stole that from an article (I think?) on Stephen Fry which said he had a brain the size of Kent. But thank you!