Comments | goldvermilion87: Sherlock Fic: The Case of Sylvia Cynthia Grenville

goldvermilion87

Sherlock Fic: The Case of Sylvia Cynthia Grenville

Dec 01, 2011 20:43

Written for thegameison_sh.

The Case of Sylvia Cynthia Grenville
“It’s your fault! It’s your fault that she’s gone! You never loved her. You’ve never treated her like a person! I don’t think I want to be married to you anymore!”

“But I didn’t lose her! You had her yesterday.”

“And you PROMISED! You PROMISED to take care of her. To love her and now…”

“There’s no ( Read more... )

sherlock (bbc), fan fiction

Comments 10

alltoseek December 2 2011, 02:13:56 UTC

I LOVED THIS ONE!

Can't remember if I commented on the game post or not. Anyway:

:D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3 :D <3

I'm pretty sure I voted for it too.

SO CUTE! :D Cute ickle Sherlock and his cute ickle deductions! And cute Charlotte 'divorcing' him :( - oh so sad! And it wasn't even his fault! And he tried so hard!

Absolutely adorable - still cheers me up! :D

goldvermilion87 December 2 2011, 02:27:38 UTC

:-D

Thank you so much! I am sure I have to be careful not to overdo ickle Sherlock... but HE'S SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pony_rocks December 2 2011, 10:25:44 UTC

XD That's precious!

goldvermilion87 December 2 2011, 12:43:44 UTC

Thanks. :-)

capt_facepalm December 2 2011, 13:04:00 UTC

What great fun!
Nice reference to pawprints of gigantic hounds!
Have you given any thought to who adult!Lottie grows into, and how she and Sherlock would interact?
:D

goldvermilion87 December 2 2011, 13:43:28 UTC

Thanks. :-)

I think that Lottie and he lose touch completely... just one of those people you know when you're little but if you met them again you'd barely recognize them.

litlover12 December 2 2011, 14:14:46 UTC

Genius!

goldvermilion87 December 2 2011, 14:15:42 UTC

Thanks! :-)

eanor December 3 2011, 10:54:33 UTC

Such a fun story! :-) Poor little Sherlock, not getting a happy ending even after so successfully applying his methods of deduction...

Like most of your fics I had to read this one very carefully (and actually several times) before I really got it. So it was kind of lost for me in the games, but now I can appreciate it properly! :-) (That is a compliment for you, even if it may not sound like one because one has to think when reading your fic. Or maybe it just states that I am a very poorly concentrated reader). Anyway, I really liked how you blended all the differently told little drabbles (dialogue, deduction, letters...) together. :-)

goldvermilion87 December 3 2011, 16:37:43 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I really want my stories to be subtle, and to force readers to think, HOWEVER, I also don't want them to be _too_ subtle, and that's something I'm working on... I'm sure that any confusion on your part was at least 75% my responsibility. :-P