Sans Voir -- Endgame

[goldvermilion87]

Middlegame III

Comments

[arisprite]

I really loved this :) The mystery in the MiddleGame section was very cool. It makes perfect sense for Sherlock to be on a list of geniuses Moriarty is after, though he is the crown jewel of it :) I loved the couple from Sherlock's university, and I'd love to see them again :)
And then the Endgame was a perfect finish, that leads right into that final pool scene.
Great work!
Ari

[goldvermilion87]

Thank you so much! We had so much fun writing it, and are very glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[red_chapel]

This was a great story. Love how you worked in both BBC and canon, interweaving the threads. And that your dialog carries so much information -- you can see what the characters are doing without description many times. Thank you for sharing this!

[goldvermilion87]

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[mariole]

Ah, too short, is my only complaint!

> a psychopath who targeted geniuses?
He was just paranoid.

This is where we chime in, "Trust your feelings, Luke." I like how this series shows off how intuitive John is.

> And I refuse to follow up on someone’s petty case just because they might pay me.”

What a lovely modernization of the original Holmes! Great characterization.

[goldvermilion87]

Thank you so much for commenting. We're so glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[goldvermilion87]

BTW: When we were working out the plot we kept saying that John "felt a disturbance in the force." So your comment made me giggle!

[mariole]

Watson is positively seething with midi-chlorians.

[bugeyedmonster]

This was great.

[goldvermilion87]

Thank you!

[dork_nerd]

I loved this! The reinterpretation of the lead-up to the end of the first season... you lot are the geniuses! What a lovely adventure to read!

[goldvermilion87]

Thank you so much! We're so glad that you had fun reading it, as we had a LOT of fun writing it. :-)