A Cold Wind Blows (13/13)

Jul 13, 2009 18:46



Epilogue

Olivia’s series of short pleas was punctuated with light moans:

“Oh yeah.”

“That’s it.”

“Mmmm.”

“Amazing.”

“Keep going, don’t stop!”

“That feels so good.”

“Ohhh, what you’re doing now?  I think that’s illegal in thirty-seven states.”

“Mmmmm.”

"Wait!  What happened?”  Olivia opened her eyes and looked down the length of her ( Read more... )

otalia, a cold wind blows

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xejanfan July 13 2009, 23:45:09 UTC
rotflmfao! cute epilogue for a great story. really wish we had a sequel *nudge, nudge* about a certain mayor in a rainbow cape *nudge nudge*. there's a lotta good lovin' we missed in those many years between chapters, sooooo... *more insistent nudging*

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otalia4life July 14 2009, 01:07:36 UTC
great!!

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ladyvictory July 14 2009, 01:35:20 UTC
Hahaha, aww, cute ending! ^_^

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lbecka July 14 2009, 02:19:00 UTC
Yes! This story totally rocked the house. Your audience awaits the sequel, epilogue or next chapter... Yeah!

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Thank you! infernoweaver July 14 2009, 02:53:21 UTC
OMG!

So many great things in this final chapter...

“Wearing that rainbow colored cape to the last city council meeting did make a statement.” <--- can we have that on the actual show, please? with a cherry on top?

Olivia looked around. “Nah. We can take it with us. A few hammers and saws and we can pack it up and move it where ever we go.”

“Olivia! You make it sound like a set from a television show or something.” <--- lmfao!!

“I was thinking that perhaps we could stay right here. In our home. And make love for a Lifetime.” <--- sigh! why didn't THAT happen? :(

“Here’s to Lifetime,” then she pulled Natalia to her, reveling in the realization that this woman was the Guiding Light that had led her home." <--- that last line was made of pure win and pure sadness, all at once.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.

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