NejiTen "Blackbird" NC-17

[goldberry]

So, I was seconds away from dedicating this to alena_s_anigor for making me a gorgeous KuroFai wallpaper, when I suddenly realized I wasn't sure if she actually reads this sort of fic. Now I sort of feel like a failure, but it's the thought that counts, right? ♥ Please note the rating on this one. It might be a little on the high side, considering there's no

Comments

[katakokk]

OMG SO VERY AWESOME!

OH, BERRY-SAN, YOU WRITE AMAZINGGGGGG NEJITEN. EVEN TENTEN WITH RANDOM OC SEMI-PORN NEJITEN. XD

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THE ENDING KILLED ME. WONDERFUL. ♥

....And, btw, it's spelled daimyo.

[goldberry]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH, DEAREST~!♥ I'm glad you liked the random OC semi-porn. ;D

(And, oops! Typo! It's fixed.)

[goldberry]

Thanks you, darling~!♥

[angel_love_song]

beautiful work. it's raw, emotional and vivid. though nejiten is implied, it screams its intentions loud and clear. i love the twist too! (i thought it was neji she was going with until i saw the word "boy". neji is a *man* XD) i love your stories and i hope you'll never stop writing them :)

[goldberry]

Haha! I was hoping people would think it was Neji at first and then by like, "BWAH?". (And Neji is so a man. *WINKWINK*) Thanks for reading! I appreciate the kind comments. ♥

[himehikari]

OMG this is amazing!As always.♥
The last few lines is ♥
It has such a deep meaning..

[goldberry]

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting. ♥

[wordynessie]

*glooooomp* LOVE IT SO BAD. Which is good! :P

It really brought forward a few thoughts that could definitely come into play in the life of an adult, female ninja. I think you did a great job the set up of a fairly harsh situation, and that last flashback makes it all PRICELESS.

A couple things (dunno if you care to catch them):

There's a tense change at "Neji is [was?] standing before her..." Around there.

And this looked a little funky: "She said Lord Shinato forced her down there four days [ago?]."

Again, phenomenal one shot. It's nice to see some new stuff from you, dear! ...Calendar Suite...

giddy

[shenhui]

It's good.. *giggles* I love the ending too.. I really like reading your works..

Re: giddy

[goldberry]

Thank you, my dear~!♥ I'm glad you liked it.

[goldberry]

I'm such a slow writer these days. My mojo is...er...mojo-less. 8D I'm glad I could get something out and my next project is totally The Calendar Suite, no worries. ♥