NejiTen "The Fortuneteller" Chapter Nine

[goldberry]

Kicking off the weekend! ♥

Title: The Fortuneteller - Chapter Nine
Series: Naruto
Pairings/Characters: NejiTen, SasuSaku, Naruto, Lee, Gai, Orochimaru
Word Count: 2,399
Rated: PG-13
Chapters: I, II, III, IV, V, VI, VII, VIII, IX, X, XI, XII, XIII
Notes: There's another kiss, but you might not be as happy about this one. Also, this story is going

Comments

[toboe_lonewolf]

That...has to be one of the most painful cliffhangers ever. GAH. *flails fists*

The collective response of my mind in regards to this fic, which I have horribly been reading and yet not reviewing, so fail me, is "Bwuh." Bwuh, at the total awesomeness that overwhelms processing power that I am unable to formulate anything much of value. Yep.

The way you craft this AU is nothing short of amazing. Seriously. I love how you've taken characteristics of the characters and placed them into this universe. Also, Tenten as a seer is of major win, must say that now. Orochimaru doing the tongue thing, so not major win at all. ...Um, hopefully there isn't like, a curse seal down her mouth now because uh, that would be seriously weird. XD

I know this is going on hiatus, but I'm definitely going to be bouncing when this returns! =D

[wordynessie]

Um, hopefully there isn't like, a curse seal down her mouth now because uh, that would be seriously weird

Tenten: Ack! I'm choking on a curse seal!

LMAO.

But Berry! *wibbles* This chapter may have some of the best writing you've ever done. You and scary!Orochimaru tongue, what is up with that?! XD

I absolutely loved the characterization for Naruto, the mention of "fates" from Neji, and Gai's "And ME!" So perfect! You've definitely managed to keep them all in character in the AU setting - which is maaaahvelous by the way.

Poor Tenten! And Shikamaru, you troublesome WHORE. :P

Awesome job, dear!

[goldberry]

Orochimaru's tongue is the source of NIGHTMARES. Can you imagine kissing him? UGH. So I had to make it as gross as possible because it SO WOULD BE. *shudder*

YAY! Good characterization! I'm glad to hear that as that is my source of pain in AUs.

Don't count out Shikamaru juuuuust yet. I may have something in story for him. Maybe. ♥

Thanks, darling!

[goldberry]

I knew the cliffhanger would be painful. Sorry about that. ♥ Good news is that my hiatus probably won't be all that long so you should have resolution in a timely manner! :D

I can "Bwuh". In fact, I'm flattered by it!

HAHAHAHA, well, let me reassure that Tenten does not have a curse seal down her throat. But yes, the kiss was supposed to be squicky because Orochimaru is just that gross, in my opinion. And really, when else do I get to disgust you guys? XDXD *SHOT*

[chariel]

OH. TEMPORARY HIATUS? *falls on knees* BUTBUTBUT -

This is the most brilliant chapter by far. <3 The Orochimaru/Tenten part was so unexpected! I love how you did that. I thought I had this story figured out...but I didn't expect Tenten to go back and I certainly didn't expect what happened when she returned!

Shikamaru! <333 All my favorite characters are in now, except Ino. I simply love this story. Thanks for sharing your writing with the multitude of NejiTen fans who desperately await your latest fanfiction! =D

[goldberry]

VERY temporary hiatus. I doubt it will be that long before the next chapter is out. ♥

Thank you! Yes, Orochimaru is a slimy bastard, isn't he? ICK. I'm glad it surprised you though, there's no fun in a story that you can figure out. ;D

Oh Shikamaru, I admit I must have a soft spot for him too to include him all the time. I'm glad you're loving this story and I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for the next chapter. ;)

[shikyo_yaiba]

...This has me so sad now. T.T I want to know what haaaaappeeeensssss. D: An amazing fic. I shall await your next update after this hiatus. ^^

[blooming_cosmo]

When I read your notes I had a hunch that you were going for that kiss, and when I read I still cringed anyway. XD Fantastic writing though. I really enjoyed this chapter...but now I'm sad cause it will likely be a while before another chapter is out. Man...I would have rather had the hiatus start last chapter then get a cliffhanger and made to wait. XDD

I absolutely loved the beginning of this before you had Tenten leave. That was such a gorgeous scene. And your characterization of Naruto made me so happy. I really adore the way you write him. It's so like him to say something like that to Neji. Wah...I could gush about your story forever, but I think I'll stop here cause you probably don't want to hear all that. XD

[goldberry]

Yes, Orochimaru is just nasty, isn't he? GROSS. Ah, but it won't be too long till the next chapter. My novel writing is sort of winding down so I imagine I'll start on the next chapter rather soon. ♥

I'm evil with the cliffhangers. I will admit. *HALO*

Hmmm, I find it interesting that you like my portrayal of Naruto. I never think I write him correctly so I'm glad to hear this! And there just had to be a good conversation about fate. Neji needs a kick in the pants sometimes. XDXD

Thanks, hon! ♥

[light_flower]

*so late* adfvgbhg..

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.. is all I have to say about this chapter :D *loves* Orochimaru is a sneaky bastard. and wow, I loved the beginning and end of this. what a cliffhanger though T____T