Doctor Who and the Star of Arcadia - Heat Haze at the Obelisk 7/16

[gogo_didi]

Title: Doctor Who and the Star of Arcadia - Heat Haze at the Obelisk 7/16
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, The Doctor (10), OFC, OMCs, Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart, Benton, Johnson
Pairings: Jack/Ianto
Disclaimer: Neither Torchwood or Doctor Who are mine
Summary: In the Citadel of the Time Lords, about 250 million light years away from Earth

Comments

[tempusdominus10]

Splendid, splendid! just a quick catch though-
a few spelling errors!

just remember:

They Own = THEIR
They Are = THERE

ANDDDD:

to listen = is to HEAR

to be = is HERE

Great job!!!!!

[gogo_didi]

Thanks, glad you like it :-)

[vipersweb]

how exciting! Nice to see Evans not die. *g* Also like how you demonstrate that Into isn't a fully trained agent and that he makes rookie mistakes, and that Jack can't do everything with ease.

[gogo_didi]

I like Evans so I thought it was nice not to have him fall at the curse of the red shirt (or the name Steve in my fics case...lol)

Nobody is perfect and if the boys had been they wouldn't have been half as interesting

:-)

[imshi]

i love trooper evans! he actually kicks arse! also, he has REALLY cool name!

i'm going to go and find turlough episode somewhere now!

(is there going to be a 4th doctor one? please?)

[gogo_didi]

Turlough episodes are good cos I always liked his character. He's not a good guy but he isn't really a bad guy either.

Sadly there are no 4th doctor ones. I wanted one but we couldn't make it fit :-(

[imshi]

oh no! but but but.... it's TOM!

it's alright really, of course it is! i don't love your fics any less for the lack of tom!

[gogo_didi]

I love him too but the episode had to go a certain way and none of his fit, which was a total shame.

The next one's up now though, hope you like it :-)