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So. I have been writing so much more since my break-up with James. I am so happy that is over with. I sometimes wish that it hadn't happened. But at the same time I know that I learned a very valueble lesson during all of the pain that I went through, plus that type of stuff always makes great songs.
Well, speaking of songs. I wrote a new one two nights ago. It is about a girl that thinks that she is in love, but at the same time she is unsure about the whole idea of dating again. She is wondering what the guy thinks about the whole situation and she is basically saying that part of her is unsure, but the other part is ready to just JUMP into love. And that is basically what the chorus of the song says. So I was basically just wondering what you guys thought about it... Are there any parts that I should change.. or seem too confusing??
If we were together,
would you stay with me?
and love me for who I am...
Would you fulfill my dreams?
For What I say,
I hope this comes true.
But I'm still a little unsure
of trying someone new.
:Chorus:
I'm hoping that you'll tell me
where we should go from here
I'm on the edge of jumping
is my landing clear?
What is it that you want from me?
I don't want to drown...
I see you standing down there
and I'm 50 ft above the ground.
If we were together,
do you think we would last?
I think that I'm getting scared
cause I know that I'm falling fast.
I know that I'm risking
another possible broken heart
but if we were together,
would we fall apart?