Tripping Angel: To Do
1) Scene with Wolf and Angel
2) Angel and Neil reconcile
3) Place ending from last draft with some touch-ups.
4) Replace beginning with altered start of previous draft
5) Read through the entire new draft for what needs to be tweaked
6) Have a reading for further, final tweaks.
Neil and Angel work much better, but there are some things from early that I know got dropped later in the script. This is easily fixable, but I'd like to revisit the draft as an entire piece instead of while in the middle of it.
Current page count: 150, which isn't as bad as it would seem. House on White Street was 186 pages or so and came out to a two-hour film, only having a few scenes we didn't film. I think this will end up being about the same page count and running time.
2) Angel and Neil reconcile
3) Place ending from last draft with some touch-ups.
4) Replace beginning with altered start of previous draft
5) Read through the entire new draft for what needs to be tweaked
6) Have a reading for further, final tweaks.
Neil and Angel work much better, but there are some things from early that I know got dropped later in the script. This is easily fixable, but I'd like to revisit the draft as an entire piece instead of while in the middle of it.
Current page count: 150, which isn't as bad as it would seem. House on White Street was 186 pages or so and came out to a two-hour film, only having a few scenes we didn't film. I think this will end up being about the same page count and running time.